Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-08.txt

Hi,

I will review this carefully soon, but I already noticed one nit.
The IANA Considerations needs to include registration of the two
GRASP objectives. There's a model for that at
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-05#section-8
and the registry even exists:
https://www.iana.org/assignments/grasp-parameters/grasp-parameters.xhtml#objective-names

Regards
   Brian

On 14/10/2017 06:33, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key Infrastructures (BRSKI)
>         Authors         : Max Pritikin
>                           Michael C. Richardson
>                           Michael H. Behringer
>                           Steinthor Bjarnason
>                           Kent Watsen
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-08.txt
> 	Pages           : 59
> 	Date            : 2017-10-13
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies automated bootstrapping of a remote secure
>    key infrastructure (BRSKI) using vendor installed X.509 certificate,
>    in combination with a vendor's authorizing service, both online and
>    offline.  Bootstrapping a new device can occur using a routable
>    address and a cloud service, or using only link-local connectivity,
>    or on limited/disconnected networks.  Support for lower security
>    models, including devices with minimal identity, is described for
>    legacy reasons but not encouraged.  Bootstrapping is complete when
>    the cryptographic identity of the new key infrastructure is
>    successfully deployed to the device but the established secure
>    connection can be used to deploy a locally issued certificate to the
>    device as well.
> 
> 
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