[Anima] Addressing RTG-DIR review (was Re: Last Call Expired: <draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-24.txt>)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
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Thread-Topic: Addressing RTG-DIR review (was Re: Last Call Expired: <draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-24.txt>)
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Subject: [Anima] Addressing RTG-DIR review (was Re: Last Call Expired: <draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-24.txt>)
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Dear authors,

Please upload a revised-ID to address Joel Halpern's RTG-DIR review based on the discussions early April. As soon as the revised-ID is uploaded, then I am continuing the publication process __

Regards and thank you Joel for the review

-éric

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Subject: Last Call Expired: <draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-24.txt>


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