Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-07.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Tue, 19 December 2017 01:41 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-07.txt
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This version fixes several IESG comments:
 - short explanation why this is Informational
 - updated RFC2119 boilerplate
 - noted risk of fragmentation of routing table
 - improved wording about hierarchical network topology

Regards
   Brian Carpenter

On 19/12/2017 14:34, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Autonomic IPv6 Edge Prefix Management in Large-scale Networks
>         Authors         : Sheng Jiang
>                           Zongpeng Du
>                           Brian Carpenter
>                           Qiong Sun
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-07.txt
> 	Pages           : 22
> 	Date            : 2017-12-18
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document defines two autonomic technical objectives for IPv6
>    prefix management at the edge of large-scale ISP networks, with an
>    extension to support IPv4 prefixes.  An important purpose of the
>    document is to use it for validation of the design of various
>    components of the autonomic networking infrastructure.
> 
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management/
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-07
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
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