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To: Matthias Kovatsch <ietf@kovatsch.net>, anima <anima@ietf.org>, anima-chairs <anima-chairs@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm <draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Anima] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm
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Dear Matthias, all

Thank you for your review and the proposals on making the draft more readable. I will go ahead an incorporate as much as possible from your suggestions to submit an update before the deadline on Monday.
I will keep track on commenting by using the ANIMA github:
[1] https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/pull/85<https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski-prm%2Fpull%2F85&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7Cc83c4601b1fa4f9657c208db1ff26a9a%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638138898257051084%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ycUBiF7C38S7Q6IopJdgFpBKkTaSVkp%2Ft%2Fr3fdEkt0Q%3D&reserved=0>
[2] https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/tree/shepherd-review<https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski-prm%2Ftree%2Fshepherd-review&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7Cc83c4601b1fa4f9657c208db1ff26a9a%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638138898257051084%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=boajv5dIBD5xJb4bO36OjylqgwVndHk5T27Nrz3Dsqk%3D&reserved=0>

BTW, I'm still working on Toerless feedback and see if more issues need to be created. For the main issues raised, there are already issues created with respective proposals:
#79 discovery of registrar with BRSKI-PRM function set<https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/issues/79>
#80 pledge discovery using GRASP?<https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/issues/80>
#81 Additional text to explain usage of agent-signed data <https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/issues/81>
#82 Include text related to TLS library issues<https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/issues/82>
#83 Clarify re-enrollment support in BRSKI-PRM<https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/issues/83>
#84  use of registrar endpoints for responder vs. initiator mode<https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/issues/84>

Best regards
Steffen

From: Matthias Kovatsch <ietf@kovatsch.net>
Sent: Mittwoch, 8. März 2023 17:30
To: anima <anima@ietf.org>; anima-chairs <anima-chairs@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm <draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm@ietf.org>
Subject: Shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm

Dear Anima WG, co-chairs, and authors

I started my shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm. I currently see the need for some restructuring to make the draft clearer to the reader and easier to implement. Hence my review is done as work-in-progress pull request in the GitHub repo of the draft [1].

Comments by Toerless have been captured as issues by the draft authors and will be resolved after the pull request is merged; where possible, they can be addressed in iterations going into the shepherd-review branch [2].

Best wishes,
Matthias

[1] https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/pull/85<https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski-prm%2Fpull%2F85&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7Cc83c4601b1fa4f9657c208db1ff26a9a%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638138898257051084%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ycUBiF7C38S7Q6IopJdgFpBKkTaSVkp%2Ft%2Fr3fdEkt0Q%3D&reserved=0>
[2] https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-prm/tree/shepherd-review<https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fanima-wg%2Fanima-brski-prm%2Ftree%2Fshepherd-review&data=05%7C01%7Csteffen.fries%40siemens.com%7Cc83c4601b1fa4f9657c208db1ff26a9a%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638138898257051084%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=boajv5dIBD5xJb4bO36OjylqgwVndHk5T27Nrz3Dsqk%3D&reserved=0>

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