[Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constrained-voucher
Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> Fri, 27 April 2018 21:24 UTC
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Subject: [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constrained-voucher
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A fast review of the document, but I have no problems with having it adopted. * In section 1 para #4 you appear to have a formatting error where a list was supposed to exist. * Section 5 - you have a return of multiple items with the same rt value. However I would not want to have to filter through the list of return values to figure out which is the "root" one. Should this example have the rt=ace.est attribute on all of the links? * Section 5 the description of ct=16 is not quite correct as it is missing the encrypt0 subtype. This text might lead people to conclude that any application/cose type can use 16 * Suggest a strong recommendation on not use cmsVersion=1 to make your life easier. Jim
- Re: [Anima] sending raw public key over the wire Jim Schaad
- [Anima] sending raw public key over the wire Michael Richardson
- Re: [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constraine… Michael Richardson
- [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constrained-vo… Jim Schaad
- Re: [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constraine… peter van der Stok
- Re: [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constraine… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constraine… Jim Schaad
- Re: [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constraine… Jim Schaad
- Re: [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constraine… peter van der Stok
- Re: [Anima] draft-richardson-anima-ace-constraine… peter van der Stok