Re: [Anima] minor clarifications to voucher

[Toerless Eckert <[e-mail]>]

Thanks, Bill

I have opened an issue against this on github, just for tracking purposes so that
we can fix these things more easily in batches.

Anyone who has an issue with the draft is also welcome to submit the issue directly to github:

https://github.com/anima-wg/voucher/issues

The same is true for other drafts in the github, eg: BRSKI:

https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/issues

Cheers
    Toerless

On Tue, Jun 20, 2017 at 10:31:39AM -0400, William Atwood wrote:
> Nit:
> s/manufacture/manufacturer/
> 
> See below for position.
> 
>   Bill
> 
> On 20/06/2017 10:14 AM, Michael Richardson wrote:
> > 
> > Based upon discussion last week about synchronizing the voucher document with
> > the BRSKI MASA protocol the following clarification was made to the voucher
> > document as part of the WGLC:
> > 
> > 
> > -          signed using a PKCS#7 structure.  The voucher artifact is generated by
> > -          the pledge's manufacture or delegate (i.e. the MASA).</t>
> > +          signed using a PKCS#7 structure.  The voucher artifact is normally generated by
> > +          the pledge's manufacture or delegate (i.e. the Manufacturer Authorized Signing
>                           manufacturer
> > +          Authority). A voucher artifact could be signed by a non-MASA and be compliant
> > +          to the specified artifact format described in this document. The appropriate
> > +          use and trust of such vouchers is out-of-scope of this document.
> > +          </t>
> > 
> >             <t>This document only defines the voucher artifact, leaving it to other
> >             documents to describe specialized protocols for accessing it.</t>
> > @@ -75,7 +79,8 @@
> > 
> >           <t>This document defines a strategy to securely assign a pledge to an owner,
> >           using an artifact signed, directly or indirectly, by the pledge's manufacturer
> > -        or delegate (i.e. the MASA).  This artifact is known as the voucher.</t>
> > +        or delegate, i.e. the Manufacturer Authorized Signing
> > +        Authority (MASA).  This artifact is known as the voucher.</t>
> > 
> >           <t>The voucher artifact is a JSON document, conforming to a data model
> >           described by YANG <xref target="RFC7950"/>,  that has been signed using
> > @@ -265,7 +270,7 @@ NOTE: All voucher types include a 'Pledge ID serial number'
> > 
> >         <section title="Voucher" anchor="voucher">
> > 
> > -        <t>The voucher's purpose is to securely assign a pledge to an owner.
> > +        <t>The voucher's primary purpose is to securely assign a pledge to an owner.
> >           The voucher informs the pledge which entity it should consider to be
> >          its owner.</t>
> > 
> > 
> > --
> > Michael Richardson <[e-mail]>, Sandelman Software Works
> >  -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-
> > 
> > 
> > 
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