Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-distribution-07.txt

[Sheng Jiang <[e-mail]>]

Hi, ANIMAers,

We have largely rewrite this document giving the comments we received. If you looked at the diff between -06 and current -07, you would find how much improvement we have made. We therefore would like to give more review and move this document further. The changes summarized as below:

A, Most importantly, added Section 6, Processing Behaviors on Autonomic Nodes, partly based on previous node behaviors section. We clearly described how to use the newly defined GRASP extensions to meet the functional requirements.

B, Refine the Abstract and Introduction, integrate technical analysis into chapter 4. So readers can clearly learn the document purpose from the streamlined texts.

C, Added new smart home use case.

D, Re-sort out the analysis of information distribution modes and requirements. Clearly point out the gaps of current GRASP protocol.

E, Refined the text and general format, including reference correction, requirement language text, grammar errors,  and many editorial changes. We are now zero idnit.

F, Removed the open issues records from appendix.

Reviews and comments are appreciated. Thanks and regards,

Sheng



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>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts



>directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking



>Integrated Model and Approach (ANIMA) WG of the IETF.



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>   Title           : Information Distribution over GRASP



>   Authors         : Sheng Jiang



>                     Artur Hecker



>                     Bing Liu



>                     Xun Xiao



>                     Xiuli Zheng



>                     Yanyan Zhang



>   Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-grasp-distribution-07.txt



>   Pages           : 25



>   Date            : 2023-03-10



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>Abstract:



>   This document analyzes the Information distribution models in the



>   Autonomic Networks that are based on the ANI.  Most of instantaneous



>   modes and their requirements have been met by GRASP already.



>   However, in order to effectively support the asynchronous information



>   distribution modes, which is newly described in this document,



>   several new GRASP extensions are defined.  This document also



>   describes the corresponding behaviors on processing these new



>   extensions.



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