[Anima] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis-19.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Tue, 02 December 2025 20:49 UTC

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internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
    > Title:   A Voucher Artifact for Bootstrapping Protocols
    > Authors: Kent Watsen
    > Michael C. Richardson
    > Max Pritikin
    > Toerless Eckert
    > Qiufang Ma
    > Name:    draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis-19.txt
    > Pages:   51
    > Dates:   2025-12-02

...

    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-rfc8366bis-19

This version includes all of Esko's review comments/changes.
Esko figured out how to do the non-augment version of ietf-voucher-request,
and we committed that.  We santizied all of the SID allocations.
We have removed "choice" from the YANG modules, but left that as a comment.
I have three text-wraps that I did after looking at the YANG, which just
avoids needless 8792 wrapping, so that will be in whatever next version that
follows WGLC/AD review.



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