Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Wed, 18 October 2017 01:57 UTC

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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Date: Wed, 18 Oct 2017 14:57:53 +1300
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Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06.txt
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Hi,

This version is intended to respond to the various comments received
during IETF Last Call. I have BCC'ed the reviewers FYI (further
comments are welcome, of course). There were overlapping points in
the reviews so it doesn't seem useful to respond individually.

Basically all the changes are editorial improvements and clarifications
of scope. 

Reminder: the demo implementation is documented at
https://github.com/becarpenter/graspy/blob/master/pfxm3.pdf

Regards
   Brian

On 18/10/2017 14:36, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Autonomic IPv6 Edge Prefix Management in Large-scale Networks
>         Authors         : Sheng Jiang
>                           Zongpeng Du
>                           Brian Carpenter
>                           Qiong Sun
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 22
> 	Date            : 2017-10-17
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document defines two autonomic technical objectives for IPv6
>    prefix management at the edge of large-scale ISP networks, with an
>    extension to support IPv4 prefixes.  An important purpose of the
>    document is to use it for validation of the design of various
>    components of the autonomic networking infrastructure.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management/
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
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