Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-eckert-anima-stable-connectivity-00.txt
Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Mon, 03 November 2014 21:40 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-eckert-anima-stable-connectivity-00.txt
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Hi,
I think my main comment right now on this draft
is: please change the title and maybe expand the
abstract. It would definitely help if the title
mentioned OAM, because at the moment it seems to
make a very general claim but the intended applicability
is more limited.
Brian
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