[apps-discuss] R: Fw: New Version Notification for draft-wmills-oauth-lrdd-02.txt

[Goix Laurent Walter <[e-mail]>]

Hello bill,

Thanks for the update. I also believe this should be straightforward...

Some comments regarding your latest revision:

-          The page header still mentions "A SASL/GSS-API Mechanism for OAuth" and needs cleanup

-          Section 2: you mention "C:", "S:" and SASL terminology that are not used in the draft and need cleanup

-          4.1.2: /s/available/available (twice)

-          4.1.2: you mention "The client MAY use this to determine if the client supports ..." (for grant types and token types). Isn't it rather the client to determine whether the *server* support these grant types? What about "The client MAY use this to determine the grant/token types available at the server"?

-          5.1: maybe you could provide https endpoints in your example rather than http as this would be more typical/in line with oauth recommendations

-          5.2: /s/soupporting/supporting

-          6.2: note that the wf i-d is now wg (ietf-appsawg-webfinger-00)

In general I am not that clear about your representation of the "grant-types" and "token-types" properties/attributes in the examples. Based on rfc6415 xrd/jrd mapping there seem to be some inconsistency on the mapping: do you envision these as link attributes or as properties?

Cheers
walter


Da: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]] Per conto di William Mills
Inviato: mercoledì 26 settembre 2012 3.58
A: Apps Discuss
Oggetto: [apps-discuss] Fw: New Version Notification for draft-wmills-oauth-lrdd-02.txt

Hi all,

I've updated this individual draft with another example.  I'm not quite sure how to proceed though with an individual submission rather than a WG one, I don't think there's a lot left to be done.  I'd appreciate any comments, and guidance.

Thanks,

-bill



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A new version of I-D, draft-wmills-oauth-lrdd-02.txt
has been successfully submitted by William J. Mills and posted to the
IETF repository.

Filename:    draft-wmills-oauth-lrdd
Revision:    02
Title:        Link Type Registry for OAuth 2
Creation date:    2012-09-26
WG ID:        Individual Submission
Number of pages: 12
URL:            http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-wmills-oauth-lrdd-02.txt
Status:          http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wmills-oauth-lrdd
Htmlized:        http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-wmills-oauth-lrdd-02
Diff:            http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-wmills-oauth-lrdd-02

Abstract:
  Defines link type registrations for the OAuth 2 authentication
  framework.




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