[apps-discuss] Apps-team review of draft-ietf-sipcore-reinvite-07
Enrico Marocco <enrico.marocco@telecomitalia.it> Mon, 06 December 2010 14:35 UTC
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Subject: [apps-discuss] Apps-team review of draft-ietf-sipcore-reinvite-07
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Review Team reviewer for this draft (for background on apps-review, please see http://www.apps.ietf.org/content/applications-area-review-team). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-reinvite-07 Title: Re-INVITE and Target-refresh Request Handling in the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) Reviewer: Enrico Marocco Review Date: Dec 6, 2010 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC. A few clarifications suggested as minor issues. Major Issues: none. Minor Issues: In S. 4.1., the definition of local target is formally correct, but quite hard to parse. A simpler wording or maybe an example could save several brain cycles. In S. 4.4., last paragraph mixes normative and non-normative terminology and does not provide enough information for determining when mixing target refresh and media session changes may be considered acceptable. Nits: no typos found.
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