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Michael Richardson <mcr@sandelman.ottawa.on.ca> Wed, 16 April 2008 15:24 UTC

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I agree with you that there needs to be more consistency between the
documents.  I certainly appreciate the focused editorial suggestions.

The most important question is: did you understand the broader/higher
level concepts, and do they work with the applications that you are
involved in? 

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