Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-cost-mode-02

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Hi Jaime, 

Thank you for the careful review. 

Please see inline. 

Cheers,
Med

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> De : Jaime Jimenez via Datatracker <[e-mail]>
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> Objet : Artart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-cost-mode-02
> 
> Reviewer: Jaime Jimenez
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> Dear all,
> 
> I am the assigned reviewer for the Applications and Real Time Area
> Review Team (ART-ART).
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> One minor comment is that since this document sets a registry with
> a limited set of cost-modes (for now "numerical" and "ordinal")
> that require IANA registration anyways, why not assign some 8-bit
> codes ("0x0, 0x1") to save space on the wire.? 

[Med] We don't consider that because that would require changes to existing 7285 implementations. 

Probably this has
> already been discussed somewhere in the WG, so I apologize if I am
> way off on this.
> 
> Another minor comment is that RFC7285 defines variations of a JSON
> they use in now few different locations in the document, section
> 10.1, section 10.6, section 10.8.2 and after this document is
> approved also on section 10.5. To make transparent to the that
> they are different I would consider writing a line on section 3.2
> saying that neither the '.' separator nor the the at sign ('@')
> are allowed.

[Med] I don't think such a note is needed as the text is clear about allowed characters. Thanks.  

> 
> There is an extra space on 3.2: U+0041 -U+005A Should be: U+0041-
> U+005A
> 

[Med] Fixed.

> There is a typo on 3.2: ('_', +005F)
> Should be: ('_', U+005F)
> 

[Med] Fixed


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