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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>, "art@ietf.org" <art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-teep-otrp-over-http-13
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Carsten: thank you for this review. Some but not all your points made it to the next version of the document, and I reported the 6.2 SHOULD one in my No Objection ballot. Hopefully we get an answer (and some additional clarifying text) before the doc is approved.

Francesca

From: art <art-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Carsten Bormann via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Tuesday, 28 June 2022 at 21:34
To: art@ietf.org <art@ietf.org>
Cc: draft-ietf-teep-otrp-over-http.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-teep-otrp-over-http.all@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org>, teep@ietf.org <teep@ietf.org>
Subject: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-teep-otrp-over-http-13
Reviewer: Carsten Bormann
Review result: Ready with Nits

Thank you for a clear specification of the way TEEP is tunneled through an HTTP
Transport.

## Minor

The list of boilerplate header fields in 4 might briefly mention why there is
no point in providing a cache-control header (as is being suggested by RFC
9205).

5.1: What is an "API session"?  This reviewer can probably guess, but would
prefer not having to.

6.2: Why is this a SHOULD?  Are there any adverse consequences of not doing
that?  What would be the reason to deviate from the SHOULD?

## Nits

Obviously, by now RFC 9110 (draft-ietf-httpbis-semantics) and RFC 9205
(draft-ietf-httpbis-bcp56bis) have been published.

Is there a difference between the end of 5.1 and the end of 5.2?
Please indicate if these are the same, or if there is a subtle difference.

7 Bullet 8:
pass -> passes



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