[art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-kemri-07
Sean Turner via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 01 February 2024 18:57 UTC
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Reviewer: Sean Turner Review result: Ready with Nits I-D Nits complains that the introduction and abstract should indicate that this I-D updates RFC 5652. Yeah this is a nit: In s2, should this: The originator establishes the CEK using these steps: be replaced by this: The originator establishes the CEK (or CAEK) using these steps: because the processing overview addresses both (see s1). Actually do the "or CEAK" in the rest of the section too? See: https://github.com/lamps-wg/cms-kemri/pull/11
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