[art] Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-14

[Sean Turner via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Sean Turner
Review result: Ready

Hi! Reviewing this because I got asked. I will note that it appears this
document has already been through IETF LC, SECDIR, and GENART among others.

These two are pretty minor (and look like a secret secdir review):

1. I-D.ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis refers to DTLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-dtls13}. Should
this I-D also refer to DTLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-dtls13} in s1? Pretty sure
changing the reference isn't going to slow down publication because this I-D
normatively references I-D.ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis.

2. Assuming that the answer is yes and you could use (D)TLS1.3 with this
protocol, I think you need to say something about or refer to the early data
concerns (see s7.2 of I-D.ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis). You might consider just
expand the 2nd sentence in the 1st para of s8 to also refer to s7.2 or
I-D.ietf-dots-rfc8782-bis?