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Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com> Mon, 29 November 2021 15:34 UTC

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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, "art@ietf.org" <art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis-04
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Thank you for this review Russ! I balloted no objection (with the additional suggestion to the authors to add some CDDL).

Francesca

From: Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Thursday, 30 September 2021 at 23:30
To: art@ietf.org <art@ietf.org>
Cc: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis.all@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org>, regext@ietf.org <regext@ietf.org>
Subject: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis-04
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned ARTART reviewer for this Internet-Draft.

Document: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis-04
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2021-09-30
IETF LC End Date: 2021-10-27
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major Concerns: None.

Minor Concerns: None.

Nits:

Section 13 says: "Since the first publication of this RFC ..."
Please reword.  I think you mean since RFC 7484 was published.

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