[art] Reviewing taps-impl-12
Christian Amsüss <christian@amsuess.com> Thu, 19 May 2022 11:47 UTC
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From: Christian Amsüss <christian@amsuess.com>
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Subject: [art] Reviewing taps-impl-12
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Hello taps-impl authors, I've had a look at Implementing Interfaces to Transport Services from the point of view of a curious observer of the TAPS ecosystem without actual hands-on experience. (Also, I thought I'd review this for the ART review team -- I wasn't assigned, but still kept ART area issues in mind, and none were even remotely encountered). * "Connection establishment is only a local operation for a Datagram transport (e.g., UDP(-Lite))": I think the criterion is not Datagram transports but "transports without a handshake" or "connectionless protocols" as it is used later in the document. * "In effect, each leaf node will send the same early application data, yet encoded (encrypted) differently on the wire.": There has been a warning on the privacy implications of using the same token on different paths; doesn't sending an identical 0-RTT message racingly on multiple transports cause similar correlation issues? * Framers: What is the difference between the Final message property and the separate IsEndOfMessage event argument? Also there, the term MessageContext could use a definition. * Framers: The <tt> paragraphs in Defining Message Framers and later might be formal language or pseudocode, I can't tell. It might help if the introduction stated something around names and signatures of signals and functions being expressed in pseudocode, and that identifiers in implementations are expected to be similar to those but following the conventions of the language they are implemented in. * Is the content of messages always bytes? I certainly got that impression, but didn't see it explicitly either. (The "protocols that expose byte-streams" have that property visible in their name). When framers are used a lot, I can envision that at some point a message might not use data bytes at all any more, as all information in the underlying message is being dissected into protocol specific properties. * UDP, ConnectionError: Would those soft errors contain additional information about the ICMP error code, and can an application expect to find the (partial) original datagram in the error? * (More out of curiosity, with no expectation that this would find its way into the text unless you think I've hit a bug): In UDP Multicast Receive, which kind of ICMP notifications can come in there that would constitute a ConnectionError -- given that this transport does not send (and would thus usually not trigger any)? * The most recent changes on the two linked Python implementations had me briefly worry that they might be out of date with their last changes around 2019/2020 -- but comparing -12 with -06 it seems that the document has been stable for quite a while (with many changes appearing editorial. This nicely matches my the overall impression of this document, which is that it looks mature and ready to implement. Best regards, and thank you for the continuous work on this Christian -- To use raw power is to make yourself infinitely vulnerable to greater powers. -- Bene Gesserit axiom
- [art] Reviewing taps-impl-12 Christian Amsüss