Re: [art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Tue, 21 January 2020 21:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02
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On 1/21/20 10:49, Alissa Cooper wrote:
> I think a good solution here would be to add a sentence along the lines of the sentence above to the shepherd write-up. That way the rationale for the substitution is captured in the document’s history but not in the document itself.


Thanks for the suggestion. I have added corresponding text to the 
shepherd's write-up.

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