Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9271 <draft-rprice-ups-management-protocol-15> for your review
Roger Price <ietf@rogerprice.org> Thu, 28 July 2022 08:25 UTC
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On Fri, 22 Jul 2022, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: > Approving for publication > To approve your RFC for publication, please reply to this email > stating that you approve this RFC for publication. Please use REPLY > ALL, as all the parties CCed on this message need to see your > approval. I approve the RFC-to-be 9271 for publication when subject to the changes listed in this review response. Roger Price, La Gaude, France, 2022-07-28, ietf@rogerprice.org --------------------------------------------------------------------- > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) <!--[rfced] We note that "NUT Project" and "NUT Software Project" were both used in this document. As "NUT Project" is more common, we have made the updates shown below. Please review. Original: 1.1.1. NUT Software Project The primary goal of the NUT (Network UPS Tools) Software Project [NUT] is to provide support for Power Devices, such as Uninterruptible Power Supplies. Current: 1.1.1. NUT Project The primary goal of the Network UPS Tools (NUT) Project [NUT] is to provide support for power devices, such as UPSs. --> Resolution: I agree to your updates. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 2) <!--[rfced] Section 2.2: Because it may not be clear to the reader whether the first or second edition is meant, please provide reference information for "K&R C". Original: The NUT Project has implemented an Attachment Daemon as program upsd and a set of hardware specific drivers, all written in K&R C. --> Resolution: Add a reference to the second edition as follows: Change in section 2.2 3rd paragraph: The NUT Project has implemented an Attachment Daemon as program upsd and a set of hardware specific Drivers, all written in K&R C [C2ndEd]. New in section 9.2 Informative References: [C2ndEd] Brian W. Kernighan, Dennis M. Ritchie, "The C Programming Language", 2nd edition, 1988, Prentice Hall Software Series, ISBN 0-13-110362-8. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 3) <!-- [rfced] We see that the <aside> element is used in Sections 3 and 4.2. Please review whether any of the notes in other sections of this document should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for content that is semantically less important or tangential to the content that surrounds it" (https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/xml2rfc-doc.html#name-aside-2). --> Resolution: I should be more consistent. My historical notes should also be tagged as <aside>. I propose the following changes to the XML markup: Section 2.7. Primary OLD: <t>Note: Historically, the Primary was known as the "Master".</t> NEW: <aside> <t>Note: Historically, the Primary was known as the "Master".</t> </aside> Section 2.7. Secondary OLD: <t>Note: Historically, the Secondary was known as the "Slave".</t> NEW: <aside> <t>Note: Historically, the Secondary was known as the "Slave".</t> </aside> Section 4.2.1 ATTACH OLD: <t>Note: Historically, this command was known as <tt>LOGIN</tt>. However, because <tt>LOGIN</tt> was not the conventional user access to a shell or program, the name was changed to avoid confusion.</t> NEW: <aside> <t>Note: Historically, this command was known as <tt>LOGIN</tt>. However, because <tt>LOGIN</tt> was not the conventional user access to a shell or program, the name was changed to avoid confusion.</t> </aside> Section 4.2.2 DETACH OLD: <t>Note: Historically, this command was known as <tt>LOGOUT</tt>.</t> NEW: <aside> <t>Note: Historically, this command was known as <tt>LOGOUT</tt>.</t> </aside> Section 4.2.4.3 GET ATTACH OLD: <t>Note: Historically, this subcommand was known as <tt>NUMLOGINS</tt>. Since <tt>LOGIN</tt> was not the conventional user access to a shell or program, the name was changed to avoid confusion.</t> NEW: <aside> <t>Note: Historically, this subcommand was known as <tt>NUMLOGINS</tt>. Since <tt>LOGIN</tt> was not the conventional user access to a shell or program, the name was changed to avoid confusion.</t> </aside> Section 4.2.5 HELP OLD: <t>Note: Historically, this command also returned <tt>LOGIN</tt> and <tt>LOGOUT</tt>. Because <tt>LOGIN</tt> was not the conventional user access to a shell or program, the command names were changed to <tt>ATTACH</tt> and <tt>DETACH</tt> to avoid confusion.</t> NEW: <aside> <t>Note: Historically, this command also returned <tt>LOGIN</tt> and <tt>LOGOUT</tt>. Because <tt>LOGIN</tt> was not the conventional user access to a shell or program, the command names were changed to <tt>ATTACH</tt> and <tt>DETACH</tt> to avoid confusion.</t> </aside> Section 4.2.9 PRIMARY OLD: <t>Note: Historically, this command was known as <tt>MASTER</tt>.</t> NEW: <aside> <t>Note: Historically, this command was known as <tt>MASTER</tt>.</t> </aside> Section 4.3.2 Error Responses OLD: <td><tt>ALREADY-ATTACHED</tt></td> <td><t>The client has already sent a successful <tt>ATTACH</tt> command for a given UPS and can't do it again.</t> <t>Note: Historically, this error response was <tt>ALREADY-LOGGED-IN</tt>.</t></td> NEW: <td><tt>ALREADY-ATTACHED</tt></td> <td><t>The client has already sent a successful <tt>ATTACH</tt> command for a given UPS and can't do it again.</t></td> OLD: </table> </section> NEW: </table> <aside> <t>Note: Historically, the error response <tt>ALREADY-ATTACHED</tt> was known as <tt>ALREADY-LOGGED-IN</tt>.</t> </aside> </section> --------------------------------------------------------------------- 4) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode element in the XML file to ensure correctness. If the current list of preferred values for "type" (https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/sourcecode-types.txt) does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to let us know. Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set. --> Resolution: I propose adding type="shell" attribute values as follows: Section 4.2.5 HELP <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> Section 4.2.7.1 LIST CLIENT <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> twice Section 4.2.7.2 LIST CMD <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> twice Section 4.2.7.3 LIST ENUM <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> twice Section 4.2.7.4 LIST RANGE <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> twice Section 4.2.7.5 LIST RW <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> twice Section 4.2.7.6 LIST UPS <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> twice Section 4.2.7.7 LIST VAR <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> twice Section 4.2.10 PROTVER <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> Section 4.2.14 VER <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> Section 4.3.2 Error Responses <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> Appendix E. Administrative Security <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> Appendix E.2.1 An Administrative User Logs into a Short Session <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> Appendix E.2.2 An Administrative User Logs into a Long Session <sourcecode name="" type=""> becomes <sourcecode name="" type="shell"> GLOBAL: In addition, please make the following GLOBAL change: OLD: <artwork align="center"> NEW: <artwork align="center" type="ascii-art"> --------------------------------------------------------------------- 5) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.2.12.1: The sentence below seems to imply that the servers don't trust the CAs. Is this the case? Or can "for some value of trust" be removed? Current: The servers do not know who their clients will be, so they entrust the management of a Public Key Infrastructure (PKI) to Certificate Authorities that they trust, for some value of trust. --> Resolution: If you find it clearer without the "for some value of trust", then let's remove those words. IETF Style: In the 3rd paragraph of 4.2.12.1 you changed the sentence "This situation is totally different to the World Wide Web." to "This situation is totally different than the World Wide Web." The preposition "than" seems ill at ease to me, but if that's the IETF style, then no problem. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.4: ABNF a) We adjusted the spacing of some of the comments and one definition so that the ABNF fit within our column limits. Please let us know if any updates are necessary: Original: ; E.g. HB:heartbeat1@example.com:3493 Current: ; E.g., ; HB:heartbeat1@example.com:3493 b) When we attempted to validate the ABNF using <https://tools.ietf.org/tools/bap/abnf.cgi>, we received the following error. Please let us know how we may fix this. stdin(87:0): error: Rule username was already defined on line 28 of stdin 28: ; E.g., HB:heartbeat1@example.com:3493 29: username = ups ; E.g., Power-Dept.6 30: varname = 1*LC *62( DOT 1*(DIGIT / LC) ) 31: ; E.g., outlet.1.status --> a) Resolution: Ok for me. b) Resolution: I propose changing the names used in the two rules password = "PASSWORD" SP *63VCHAR username = "USERNAME" SP username which become session-password = "PASSWORD" SP *63VCHAR session-username = "USERNAME" SP username This requires the following changes: Section 4.2.8. PASSWORD OLD: <t>ABNF: See variable <tt>password</tt> in <xref target="fig.ABNF"></xref>. NEW: <t>ABNF: See variable <tt>session-password</tt> in <xref target="fig.ABNF"></xref>. Section 4.2.13. USERNAME OLD: <t>ABNF: See variable <tt>username</tt> in <xref target="fig.ABNF"></xref>. NEW: <t>ABNF: See variable <tt>session-username</tt> in <xref target="fig.ABNF"></xref>. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.2.1: The following sentence seems to be missing something: Current: In long-lived installations, such as those found in UPS management, careful certificate management is essential, whether the certificate is provided by a Certificate Authority or is a self-signed certificate, for example, the specification of expiration times of both the certificate containing the public key and the signing certificate. Perhaps (splitting the sentence into two and highlighting that the expiration times should be specified): In long-lived installations, such as those found in UPS management, careful certificate management is essential, whether the certificate is provided by a Certificate Authority or is a self-signed certificate. For example, the expiration times of both the certificate containing the public key and the signing certificate should be specified. --> Agreed, the split sentence is much better. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 8) <!--[rfced] Per the suggestion of RFC 7942 ("Improving Awareness of Running Code: The Implementation Status Section"), may we remove the Implementation Status section of this document? --> RFC 7942 says "I-Ds published on the Independent Stream are explicitly out of scope.", but if you prefer to remove the Implementation Status section, then let's do it. I would like to keep 8.2 Recommended Minimum Support with three subsections 8.2.1, 8.2.2 and 8.2.3. This could be done either by making them a new section 8 Recommended Minimum Support as follows: OLD: 8.2 Recommended Minimum Support NEW: 8 Recommended Minimum Support OLD: 8.2.1 Desktop PC Variables NEW: 8.2 Desktop PC Variables OLD: 8.2.2 Unattended Servers and Additional Variables NEW: 8.2 Unattended Servers and Additional Variables OLD: 8.2.3 Commands and Other Technical Terms NEW: 8.2 Commands and Other Technical Terms or alternatively, if you prefer to remove section 8 entirely, then 8.2 (8.2.1 + 8.2.2 + 8.2.3) could be moved to Appendix A to become Appendix A.4 as follows: OLD: 8.2 Recommended Minimum Support NEW: A.4 Recommended Minimum Support OLD: 8.2.1 Desktop PC Variables NEW: A.4.1 Desktop PC Variables OLD: 8.2.2 Unattended Servers and Additional Variables NEW: A.4.2 Unattended Servers and Additional Variables OLD: 8.2.3 Commands and Other Technical Terms NEW: A.4.3 Commands and Other Technical Terms --------------------------------------------------------------------- 9) <!--[rfced] The following URL appears to be to a personal webpage. If possible, please provide a more stable URL. Original: [sgmlnorm] Clark, James., "SGMLNORM An SGML System Conforming to International Standard ISO 8879 - Standard Generalized Markup Language", <http://www.jclark.com/sp/sgmlnorm.htm>. --> A more permanent reference might be the OpenJade Project which maintains sgmlnorm, so I propose the following resolution: OLD: <http://www.jclark.com/sp/sgmlnorm.htm> NEW: Maintained by the OpenJade Project <http://openjade.sourceforge.net/> and included in many distributions <https://linux.die.net/man/1/sgmlnorm>. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 10) <!-- [rfced] The following reference is not cited in the text. Please let us know where it should be cited or if this reference can be deleted from the References section. [gitstats] "GitHub Network UPS Tools code repository, status names", <https://github.com/networkupstools/nut/blob/master/ clients/status.h>. --> Please delete this reference. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 11) <!-- [rfced] Table 9 does not have a title. Please review, and provide the title if desired. --> Proposed change in Appendix C: OLD: <table> <thead> NEW: <table> <name>Technical Terms: Historical Differences</name> <thead> --------------------------------------------------------------------- 12) <!-- [rfced] Acknowledgments: As the source for this document is now in RFCXML, how may the following paragraph be updated? Original: The source for this document is marked up using an SGML DTD [SGML] and an XML meta-DTD as defined by HyTime Annex A [HyTimeA]. Unlike XML, SGML offers markup minimisation, and the source document takes advantage of this. The osgmlnorm [sgmlnorm] program generates XML which program xml2rfc [RFC7991] uses to prepare the HTML and text renderings. The editor acknowledges the help received from Carsten Bormann and Julian Reschke in the xml2rfc mailing list. Perhaps: Earlier drafts of this document were prepared using an SGML DTD [SGML] and an XML meta-DTD defined by HyTime Annex A [HyTimeA]. Unlike XML, SGML offers markup minimization, and the earlier drafts took advantage of this. The osgmlnorm [sgmlnorm] program generated the XML that was used as input to xml2rfc [RFC7991], which then created the document's current source. The editor acknowledges the help received from Carsten Bormann and Julian Reschke in the xml2rfc mailing list. --> Excellent! I was concerned that you might remove all reference to SGML now that it is no longer fashionable. I'm glad you kept it. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 13) <!-- [rfced] Formatting: May we update the formatting to use just one type of text styling? Current (Section 4.2.1, for example): ...the Primary Management Daemon needs to know how many Secondaries are currently "_active_" Perhaps (using <em> tags only): ...the Primary Management Daemon needs to know how many Secondaries are currently _active_ or (using quotes only) ...the Primary Management Daemon needs to know how many Secondaries are currently "active" Current (Appendix B. Note that the double dash cannot be represented in XML comments): 1. _The public power supply is on._ - The system runs normally. Every 5 seconds, variable ups.status reports OL. - _Days, weeks, months go by..._ Perhaps (removing the dashes): 1. _The public power supply is on._ The system runs normally. Every 5 seconds, variable ups.status reports OL. _Days, weeks, months go by..._ or (removing the <em> tags): 1. The public power supply is on. - The system runs normally. Every 5 seconds, variable ups.status reports OL. - Days, weeks, months go by... --> Agreed. One type of text styling is sufficient. Perhaps its better to use <em> since the markup will allow rendering in different styles in different circumstances. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 14) <!--[rfced] Terminology: a) We've made the following terms lowercase because typically they are presented in all caps only when following Unicode hex values (e.g., "U+0022 QUOTATION MARK"). Please let us know if any updates are necessary: QUOTATION MARK / quotation mark REVERSE SLANT / reverse slant LINE FEED / line feed SPACE / space HYPHEN / hyphen b) The following terms were used inconsistently. We've chosen the latter form. Please let us know if any updates are necessary: instant command / Instant Command sub command / subcommand US-ASCII / ASCII c) The following terms are used inconsistently. Please let us know how we can make these consistent: Driver (23 instances) / driver (24 instances) Event (21 instances) / event (17 instances) Session (13 instances) / session (3 instances) --> a) OK for lower case. I was deliberately following Unicode usage, but if you prefer lower case, that's OK. b) instant command -> Instant Command OK sub command -> subcommand OK US-ASCII -> ASCII ????? IANA says that US-ASCII is the "Preferred MIME Name" and as such is the first entry at https://www.iana.org/assignments/character-sets/character-sets.xhtml so I propose to continue using US-ASCII. c) Driver: I distinguish between Driver as a component of NUT and driver as a generic piece of software but I was not consistent. Here are all the instances of driver in your file rfc9271.xml that need changing. The other instances do not need to change. The line numbers start at 1. 189 : and a set of hardware-specific drivers, all written in K&R C. [Change drivers -> Drivers] 199 : driver for each hardware interface type it supports. Although this [Change driver -> Driver] 200 : document considers the driver to be part of the Attachment Daemon, [Change driver -> Driver] 217 : is passed to the driver and [Change driver -> Driver] 263 : one system, the computer running the driver is known as the Primary. [Change driver -> Driver] 1159 : design of the UPS or its driver. [Change driver -> Driver] 1461 : Driver for the UPS, but that driver isn't providing regular updates [Change driver -> Driver] 1474 : connected. This usually means that the driver is not running or, [Change driver -> Driver] 1495 : driver.</td> [Change driver -> Driver] 2384 : <li>June 1999 Code rewrite with a UPS driver <tt>smartups</tt>, an [Change driver -> Driver] 2388 : <li>June 2001 Common core for multiple drivers.</li> [Change drivers -> Drivers] Event: Again I was not consistent. Here are all the instances of Event in your file rfc9271.xml that need changing. The other instances do not need to change. The line numbers start at 1. 209 : <t>A UPS Event occurs in the Management Daemon when a change in [Change Event -> event] 475 : response to an Event, which is taken as the basis for Management [Change Event -> event] 609 : <t>Note: The symbol "<tt>FSD</tt>" is also used for an Event. [Change Event -> event] 1900 : <t>A Management Daemon detects the occurrence of a UPS Event from [Change Event -> event] 1979 : <td>UPS communicating<br/>(Event <tt>COMMOK</tt>)</td> [Change Event -> event] 1997 : <td>System shutdown<br/>(Events <tt>FSD</tt>, <tt>SHUTDOWN</tt>) [Change Events -> events] 2006 : <xref target="BBB" format="counter"></xref> (Event <tt>LOWBATT</tt>) [Change Event -> event] 2015 : (Events <tt>COMMBAD</tt>, <tt>NOCOMM</tt>)</td> [Change Events -> events] 2033 : <td>Receiving power<br/>(Event <tt>ONLINE</tt>)</td> [Change Event -> event] 2037 : <td>Power lost<br/>(Event <tt>ONBATT</tt>)</td> [Change Event -> event] 2051 : <td>Replace battery<br/>(Event <tt>REPLBATT</tt>)</td> [Change Event -> event] 2107 : (Event <tt>NOCOMM</tt>), and if the last known <tt>OL</tt>/ [Change Event -> event] Session: Once again I was not consistent. Here are all the instances of Session in your file rfc9271.xml that need changing. The other instances do not need to change. The line numbers start at 1. 1086 : to specify the password required to enter a Session with the [Change Session -> session] 1106 : starts up and opens a Session with the Attachment Daemon, it lays [Change Session -> session] 1252 : command <tt>PASSWORD</tt> to open a Session with the Attachment [Change Session -> session] 1445 : in the same Session.</td> [Change Session -> session] 1451 : within the same Session.</td> [Change Session -> session] 3479 : within the client <tt>upsrw</tt>, and the Session is of short [Change Session -> session] 3504 : within the client <tt>upsmon</tt>, and the Session is of long [Change Session -> session] --------------------------------------------------------------------- 15) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> and let us know if any changes are needed. For example, please consider whether the following should be updated: native, man in the middle, whitespace --> I read the reference in the style guide, but didn't find the specific example needed. 1) native TLS: one instance, section D.1. I don't know of any new term which replaces "native TLS" but if there is one then let's use it. 2) man in the middle: Sections 6.1 and 6.3.2. I propose keeping this term since it is a technical term taken from IEC 62351-1. 3) whitespace: two instances to mean some combination of space and tab, section 4.1. Is there some new word which is generally understood? If so, let's use it, otherwise let's stay with the wellknown term. --------------------------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------- ISE Eliot Lear has called for more levity. https://www.ietf.org/blog/new-ise-eliot-lear/ Q IETF Blog: What are your publication priorities? A I cannot stress enough how much I value levity. So here in a general spirit of levity is a limerick about a UPS: Our servers will still be alright If power drops off in the night. That 10 year old pack of battery back up will easily...(communication lost) And another about the IETF process: The IETF takes the line That agreement be sought every time But if code's working good As the doc says it should Then rougher consensus is fine. But whether or not such levity is acceptable in an Informational RFC, I do not know. --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> Thank you. >> RFC Editor/ap/jm My thanks to you for such a detailed review. ------------------End of reply to AUTH48 comments-------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------
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