[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9970 <draft-ietf-stir-rfc4916-update-07> for your review

[Rebecca VanRheenen <[e-mail]>]

Hi Chris,

Thanks for the reply! We have updated the document accordingly (see list of updated files below). We also have a few followup questions and comments:

a) We will wait for Jon to review the changes in questions #1b and #1c:

b) Are any changes needed per the question below? That is, should the document header and abstract indicate that this document updates RFC 4916?

> 2) <!-- [rfced] The document header does not indicate that this document updates RFC 4916. However, some text in the document (see below) seems to indicate a possible Updates relationship with RFC 4916. Please review and let us know if any changes are needed.
> 
> Original:
>   This document
>   updates prior guidance on the "connected identity" problem to reflect
>   the changes to SIP Identity that accompanied STIR, ...
>   ...
>   With the obsolescence of [RFC4474] by [RFC8224], this specification
>   supersedes the guidance of [RFC4916] to reflect the changes to the
>   SIP Identity header field and the revised problem space of STIR.
> -->

c) Per the following question, should the two instances of “traditional” be updated in the document? If so, please indicate how to update.

> 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online 
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> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
> 
> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should 
> still be reviewed as a best practice.
> 
> In addition, please consider whether "traditional" should be updated for clarity.  
> While the NIST website <https://web.archive.org/web/20250214092458/https://www.nist.gov/nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions#table1>
> indicates that "tradition" is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous.  
> "Traditional" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone.
> 
> Original:
>   The Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR) framework,
>   however, provides no means for determining the identity of the called
>   party in a traditional telephone-calling scenario.
>   ...
>   In a traditional telephone call, the called party receives an
>   alerting signal and can make a decision about whether or not to pick
>   up a phone.   
> —>


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Updated XML file:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9970.xml

Updated output files:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9970.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9970.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9970.html

Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9970-auth48diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9970-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)

Diff files showing all changes:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9970-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9970-rfcdiff.html (side by side)

For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9970

Thank you,

Rebecca VanRheenen
RFC Production Center



> On May 11, 2026, at 11:48 AM, Chris Wendt <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> I am good with all of the suggested changes including: 
> 4 should use proposal 2
> 6a should be Session Description Protocol
> 7a an “rsp” sounds right to me but i’m ok with either decision
> 7b lowercase is probably appropriate if it’s not directly referring to Identity header field.
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> -Chris
> 
> 
>> On May 1, 2026, at 2:54 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
>> 
>> Authors,
>> 
>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.
>> 
>> 1) <!-- [rfced] We made the following changes per Chris's reply to the document intake form. Chris indicated that he would like for Jon to confirm that he agrees with the changes in b) and c) below; please review and confirm.
>> 
>> a) Email address for Chris
>> 
>> OLD:
>> [e-mail]
>> 
>> NEW:
>> [e-mail]
>> 
>> 
>> b) Changes to text. Please also review to let us know if any other similar changes should be made; we see other instances of '"dest" header field' and '"dest" field' in the document.
>> 
>> OLD:
>>  ... the only difference is in semantics, as the certificate
>>  signs for the "dest" header field rather than the "orig".
>> 
>> NEW:
>>  ... the only difference is in semantics, as the PASSporT is
>>  signed to authenticate the "dest" claim value rather than the "orig".
>> 
>> OLD:
>>  ... is eligible to sign responses/requests for
>>  the number in the "dest" field of the "rsp" PASSporT.
>> 
>> NEW:
>>  ... is eligible to sign responses/requests for
>>  the number in the "dest" claim of the "rsp" PASSporT.
>> 
>> 
>> c) Change to sourcecode in Section 9
>> 
>> OLD:
>> "x5u":"https://www.example.com/cert.cer"
>> 
>> NEW:
>> "x5u":"https://www.example.com/cert.pem"
>> -->
>> 
>> 
>> 2) <!-- [rfced] The document header does not indicate that this document updates RFC 4916. However, some text in the document (see below) seems to indicate a possible Updates relationship with RFC 4916. Please review and let us know if any changes are needed.
>> 
>> Original:
>>  This document
>>  updates prior guidance on the "connected identity" problem to reflect
>>  the changes to SIP Identity that accompanied STIR, ...
>>  ...
>>  With the obsolescence of [RFC4474] by [RFC8224], this specification
>>  supersedes the guidance of [RFC4916] to reflect the changes to the
>>  SIP Identity header field and the revised problem space of STIR.
>> -->
>> 
>> 
>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Document title
>> 
>> a) Please note that the title of the document has been updated as follows. Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review.
>> 
>> Original:
>> Connected Identity for STIR
>> 
>> Updated:
>> Connected Identity for Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR)
>> 
>> 
>> b) We have also updated the abbreviated title as shown below to more closely align with the document title.
>> 
>> Original:
>> Connected Identity
>> 
>> Updated:
>> Connected Identity for STIR
>> -->
>> 
>> 
>> 4) <!-- [rfced] How may we revise this sentence to clarify how the text starting with "as well as ..." connects to the rest of the sentence?
>> 
>> Original:
>>  This document
>>  updates prior guidance on the "connected identity" problem to reflect
>>  the changes to SIP Identity that accompanied STIR, and considers a
>>  revised problem space for connected identity as a means of detecting
>>  calls that have been retargeted to a party impersonating the intended
>>  destination, as well as the spoofing of mid-dialog or dialog-
>>  terminating events by intermediaries or third parties.
>> 
>> Perhaps 1 ("detecting both calls ... and the spoofing"):
>>  This document
>>  updates prior guidance on the "connected identity" problem to reflect
>>  the changes to SIP Identity that accompanied STIR. It also considers a
>>  revised problem space for connected identity as a means of detecting
>>  both calls that have been retargeted to a party impersonating the intended
>>  destination and the spoofing of mid-dialog or dialog-
>>  terminating events by intermediaries or third parties.
>> 
>> Perhaps 2 ("detecting calls ... and preventing the spoofing"):
>>  This document
>>  updates prior guidance on the "connected identity" problem to reflect
>>  the changes to SIP Identity that accompanied STIR. It also considers a
>>  revised problem space for connected identity as a means of detecting
>>  calls that have been retargeted to a party impersonating the intended
>>  destination and preventing the spoofing of mid-dialog or dialog-
>>  terminating events by intermediaries or third parties.
>> -->
>> 
>> 
>> 5) <!-- [rfced] The following phrase in this sentence is difficult to follow: "upon receiving an INVITE with no SDP, carrying a PASSporT, with a 100rel in the Require header field value". How may we update for clarity?
>> 
>> Original:
>> STIR-aware UASes that support
>> this specification, upon receiving an INVITE with no SDP, carrying a
>> PASSporT, with a 100rel in the Require header field value, SHOULD
>> follow the mechanism described in Section 4 to send a provisional
>> response carrying a PASSporT in the backwards direction.
>> 
>> Perhaps:
>> When a STIR-aware UAS that supports this specification receives an
>> INVITE that has no SDP, carries a PASSporT, and includes 100rel in the
>> Require header field, it SHOULD follow the mechanism described in
>> Section 4 to send a provisional response carrying a PASSporT in the
>> backwards direction.
>> -->
>> 
>> 
>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations
>> 
>> a) How should SDP be expanded in this document? As "Session Description Protocol" or "Service Demarcation Point"?
>> 
>> b) We have added expansions for the following abbreviation(s) per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>> 
>> Provisional Response Acknowledgement (PRACK)
>> Personal Assertion Token (PASSporT) 
>> -->
>> 
>> 
>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>> 
>> a) How is "rsp" pronounced? We ask in order to choose the appropriate indefinite article for it to follow (i.e., "a" or "an"). We see both of the following forms in the document:
>> 
>> a "rsp"
>> an "rsp"
>> 
>> 
>> b) We see both "identity" (lowercase) and "Identity" (capitalized) used in this document. The lowercase form is used consistently in the context of "connected identity", and the capitalized form is used consistently in the context of "Identity header field".
>> 
>> However, we see the following inconsistency. May we update to use the lowercase form?
>> 
>>  Identity mechanism - 1 instance
>>  identity mechanism - 2 instances
>> 
>> Also, the capitalized form is used in the following sentences. Is this correct, or should the lowercase form be used here?
>> 
>> Original:
>>  This document updates prior guidance on the "connected identity" problem
>>  to reflect the changes to SIP Identity that accompanied STIR ...
>>  ...
>>  While a mid-dialog request in the backwards direction (e.g., UPDATE)
>>  can be signed with Identity like any other SIP request, ...
>> -->
>> 
>> 
>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online 
>> Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature typically
>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>> 
>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should 
>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>> 
>> In addition, please consider whether "traditional" should be updated for clarity.  
>> While the NIST website <https://web.archive.org/web/20250214092458/https://www.nist.gov/nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions#table1>
>> indicates that "tradition" is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous.  
>> "Traditional" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone.
>> 
>> Original:
>>  The Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR) framework,
>>  however, provides no means for determining the identity of the called
>>  party in a traditional telephone-calling scenario.
>>  ...
>>  In a traditional telephone call, the called party receives an
>>  alerting signal and can make a decision about whether or not to pick
>>  up a phone.   
>> --> 
>> 
>> 
>> Thank you.
>> 
>> Rebecca VanRheenen
>> RFC Production Center
>> 
>> 
>> 
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>> 
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>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC9970 (draft-ietf-stir-rfc4916-update-07)
>> 
>> Title            : Connected Identity for STIR
>> Author(s)        : J. Peterson, C. Wendt
>> WG Chair(s)      : Ben Campbell, Robert Sparks, Russ Housley
>> Area Director(s) : Andy Newton, Charles Eckel
>> 
>> 
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