[auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang

Italo Busi <italo.busi@gmail.com> Tue, 09 June 2026 12:12 UTC

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Date: Tue, 09 Jun 2026 14:11:48 +0200
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Subject: [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang
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Hi Sarah,

Thanks for the reminder

We are planning to reply by the end of this week

Italo

Il ven 5 giu 2026, 23:00 Sarah Tarrant <starrant@staff.rfc-editor.org> ha
scritto:

> Hi Author(s),
>
> This is a second friendly reminder that we await answers to the questions
> below before continuing with the editing process for this document.
>
> If we do not hear back in the next week, we will continue with processing
> this document, but some of these questions may be repeated during Final
> Review.
>
> Thank you,
> Sarah Tarrant
> RFC Production Center
>
> > On May 29, 2026, at 11:11 AM, Sarah Tarrant <
> starrant@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Author(s),
> >
> > This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the questions below
> before continuing with the editing process for this document.
> >
> > Thank you,
> > Sarah Tarrant
> > RFC Production Center
> >
> >> On May 22, 2026, at 3:11 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> >>
> >> Author(s),
> >>
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