Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9278 <draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-03> for your review

[Kristina Yasuda <[e-mail]>]

Dear RFC Editor,

Thanks for your suggestions for this document.  The authors agree with all of them.

Attached is an updated XML source incorporating all of them and removing the corresponding comments.  Per my in-person discussion with Sandy and Alice at the RFC Editor's desk, it also changes the capitalization of the workgroup to "OAuth".

Thanks,
-- Kristina and Mike

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Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9278 <draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-03> for your review

Authors,

While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.

1) <!-- [rfced] FYI - Note that we have updated the following reference to include the author list and date per the provided URL.

Original: 
[SIOPv2]   Yasuda, K. and M. B. Jones, "Self-Issued OpenID Provider
              v2", December 2021, <https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fopenid.net%2Fspecs%2Fopenid-&amp;data=05%7C01%7CKristina.Yasuda%40microsoft.com%7C2d7cc56f0beb4913d54908da6d19137a%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637942252154162714%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=FJ4wyvFAZB%2BjpeFjsGpLE68IppptUcnpeskX7znJ9qs%3D&amp;reserved=0
              connect-self-issued-v2-1_0.html>.

Updated:    
[SIOPv2]   Yasuda, K., Jones, M., and T. Lodderstedt, "Self-Issued
              OpenID Provider v2", June 2022,
              <https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fopenid.net%2Fspecs%2Fopenid-connect-self-issued-&amp;data=05%7C01%7CKristina.Yasuda%40microsoft.com%7C2d7cc56f0beb4913d54908da6d19137a%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637942252154318948%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=Gtvf3%2FM9NW08KL30JxIF3osvSE7zpgv0JQBl6VpK4gw%3D&amp;reserved=0
              v2-1_0.html>.
-->


2) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that the JWK Thumbprint is being used as a key identifier.

Original:
   Specifically, it is being
   used a key identifier in the [SIOPv2] specification.

Current:
   Specifically, it is being
   used as a key identifier in the [SIOPv2] specification.
-->


3) <!-- [rfced] When we converted this document to v3, xml2rfc converted <spanx style="verb"> to <tt>. There is only one instance in the document; see Section 3.

In the html and pdf outputs, the text enclosed in <tt> is output in fixed-width font. In the txt output, there are no changes to the font, and the quotation marks have been removed. 

Current (fixed-width font in html/pdf; no changes to font in txt):
   urn:ietf:params:oauth:jwk-thumbprint

We note that the following text is similar to the above, but it is not enclosed in <tt>. Please review and let us know if both of these should use or should not use <tt>.
Please also know if any other text should use <tt>.

Current:
   urn:ietf:params:oauth:jwk-thumbprint:sha-256:NzbLsXh8uDCcd-
   6MNwXF4W_7noWXFZAfHkxZsRGC9Xs   
-->


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Note that our script did not identify any words or phrases of concern.
-->


Thank you.

RFC Editor



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RFC9278 (draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-03)

Title            : JWK Thumbprint URI
Author(s)        : M. Jones, K. Yasuda
WG Chair(s)      : Hannes Tschofenig, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
Area Director(s) : Roman Danyliw, Paul Wouters