[auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draft-ietf-ccamp-optical-impairment-topology-yang
Sarah Tarrant <starrant@staff.rfc-editor.org> Fri, 05 June 2026 21:02 UTC
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Subject: [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draft-ietf-ccamp-optical-impairment-topology-yang
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Hi Author(s), This is a second friendly reminder that we await answers to the questions below before continuing with the editing process for this document. If we do not hear back in the next week, we will continue with processing this document, but some of these questions may be repeated during Final Review. Thank you, Sarah Tarrant RFC Production Center > On May 29, 2026, at 11:13 AM, Sarah Tarrant <starrant@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Hi Author(s), > > This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the questions below before continuing with the editing process for this document. > > Thank you, > Sarah Tarrant > RFC Production Center > >> On May 22, 2026, at 3:20 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: >> >> Author(s), >> >> Congratulations, your document has been successfully added to the RFC Editor queue! >> The team at the RFC Production Center (RPC) is looking forward to working with you >> as your document moves forward toward publication. 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- [auth48] Document intake questions about draft-ie… rfc-editor
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Sarah Tarrant
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Sarah Tarrant
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Dieter Beller (Nokia)
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Sarah Tarrant
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Dieter Beller (Nokia)
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Sarah Tarrant
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Dieter Beller (Nokia)
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Sarah Tarrant
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Sarah Tarrant
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Sarah Tarrant
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Dieter Beller (Nokia)
- [auth48] Re: Document intake questions about draf… Sarah Tarrant