Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9532 <draft-ietf-httpbis-alias-proxy-status-07> for your review

[Karen Moore <[e-mail]>]

Dear Tommy,

We do not believe we have heard from you regarding this document's readiness for publication.  Please review the questions outlined in the email below and let us know if any updates are needed.

We will wait to hear from you before continuing with the publication process.

Best regards,
RFC Editor/kc

> On Jan 17, 2024, at 1:34 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
> 
> Author,
> 
> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> 
> 1) <!--[rfced] Should the short title that spans the header of the PDF be
> updated to more closely match the document's title and the description 
> in the Abstract/Introduction?
> 
> Original:
>   DNS Aliases Proxy-Status
> 
> Perhaps:
>   Proxy-Status for Next-Hop Aliases
> -->    
> 
> 
> 2) <!-- [rfced] Use of <tt> and quote marks
> 
> a) In the html and pdf outputs, the text enclosed in <tt> is
> output in fixed-width font. In the txt output, there are no
> changes to the font, and the quotation marks have been removed.
> 
> Please review carefully and let us know if the output is acceptable or 
> if any updates are needed.
> 
> b) Should one instance of "next-hop-aliases" (Section 5) 
> be enclosed with <tt> (instead of quote marks) for consistency 
> with the other instances in the text?
> 
> Current:
>   This document registers the "next-hop-aliases" parameter 
>   in the "HTTP Proxy-Status Parameters" registry
>   <https://www.iana.org/assignments/http-proxy-status>.
> 
> c) Please review if any of the example or DNS names below should 
> be updated with quote marks or <tt> for consistency.
> 
>   comma,name.example.com (enclosed with <tt>)
>   getaddrinfo  (enclosed with <tt>)
>   AI_CANONNAME (enclosed with <tt>)
>   "proxy.example.net" vs. proxy.example.net
>   "backslash\name.example.com"
>   "backslash\\name.example.com"
>   "dot\.label.example.com"
>   "dot%5C.label" 
>   "host.example.com"
>   "service1.example.com"
>   "tracker.example.com"
> -->
> 
> 
> 3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" for each sourcecode
> element. Note that "dns-example" is not an applicable type;
> please let us know how to update both instances that occur in
> Section 2.
> 
> The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/sourcecode-types.txt. If the current
> list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to suggest additions
> for consideration. Note that it is also acceptable to leave the "type"
> attribute not set.
> -->
> 
> 
> 4) <!--[rfced] Please confirm if RFC 1035, Section 3.1 ("Name space
> definitions") is the correct reference for this text or if it
> should perhaps be RFC 1035, Section 5.1 ("Format"), where
> characters are mentioned.
> 
> Original:
>   DNS names commonly just contain alphanumeric characters and hyphens
>   ("-"), although they are allowed to contain any character ([RFC1035],
>   Section 3.1), including a comma. 
> 
> Perhaps:
>   DNS names commonly just contain alphanumeric characters and hyphens
>   ("-"), although they are allowed to contain any character ([RFC1035],
>   Section 5.1), including a comma. 
> -->
> 
> 
> 5) <!--[rfced] In Section 2.1, the third sourcecode example contains
> characters that are over the 72-character limit, so we moved
> "service1.example.com" to the next line. Please let us know if
> this formatting is agreeable or if further updates are needed.
> 
> Original:
>   Proxy-Status: proxy.example.net; next-hop="2001:db8::1";
>       next-hop-aliases="backslash%5C%5Cname.example.com,service1.example.com"
> 
> Current:
>   Proxy-Status: proxy.example.net; next-hop="2001:db8::1";
>       next-hop-aliases="backslash%5C%5Cname.example.com,
>       service1.example.com"
> -->
> 
> 
> 6) <!--[rfced] A current version of this reference exists. Should the
> reference entry be updated to reflect the 2017 version as shown
> below, or do you prefer the 2013 version?
> 
> Original:
> [POSIX]    IEEE, "Standard for Information Technology Portable Operating
>           System Interface (POSIX(R)) Base Specifications, Issue 7", DOI
>           10.1109/ieeestd.2013.6506091, April 2013,
>           <http://ieeexplore.ieee.org/servlet/opac?punumber=6506089>.
> 
> Perhaps:
> [POSIX]    IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Information Technology-Portable
>           Operating System Interface (POSIX(TM)) Base 
>           Specifications, Issue 7", 1003.1-2017,
>           DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2018.8277153, January 2018,
>           <http://ieeexplore.ieee.org/servlet/
>           opac?punumber=6506089>.
> -->
> 
> 
> 7) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
> 
> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used 
> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how
> they may be made consistent.  
> 
>   next-hop-aliases HTTP Proxy-Status Parameter vs. 
>   next-hop-aliases Proxy-Status parameter vs.
>   next-hop-aliases parameter
> 
> b) For consistency, should "parameter" be added after
> "next-hop-aliases" in the sentences below?
> 
> Original:
>   The list of DNS names in next-hop-aliases uses a comma (",") as
>   a separator between names. 
> 
> Perhaps:
>   The list of DNS names in the next-hop-aliases parameter uses a 
>   comma (",") as a separator between names. 
> 
> ...
> Original:
>   The proxy MAY send the empty string ("") as the value of 
>   next-hop-aliases to indicate that no CNAME records were 
>   encountered when resolving the next hop's name.
> 
> Perhaps:
>   The proxy MAY send the empty string ("") as the value of the 
>   next-hop-aliases parameter to indicate that no CNAME records
>   were encountered when resolving the next hop's name.
> 
> c) FYI: Since "Unreserved Characters" is lowercase in RFC 3986, 
> we made the following instance lowercase for consistency;
> if you prefer otherwise, please let us know.
> 
> Original:
>   To prevent commas or other special
>   characters in names leading to incorrect parsing, any characters that
>   appear in names in this list that do not belong to the set of URI
>   Unreserved Characters ([RFC3986], Section 2.3) MUST be percent-
>   encoded as defined in [RFC3986], Section 2.1.
> 
> Current:
>   To prevent commas or other special
>   characters in names leading to incorrect parsing, any characters that
>   appear in names in this list that do not belong to the set of URI
>   unreserved characters ([RFC3986], Section 2.3) MUST be percent-
>   encoded as defined in [RFC3986], Section 2.1.
> -->
> 
> 
> 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online 
> Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> and let us know if any changes are needed.
> 
> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should 
> still be reviewed as a best practice.
> -->
> 
> 
> Thank you.
> 
> RFC Editor/kc
> 
> 
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> RFC9532 (draft-ietf-httpbis-alias-proxy-status-07)
> 
> Title            : HTTP Proxy-Status Parameter for Next-Hop Aliases
> Author(s)        : T. Pauly
> WG Chair(s)      : Mark Nottingham, Tommy Pauly
> Area Director(s) : Murray Kucherawy, Francesca Palombini
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