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Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) <!-- [rfced] We updated the document title as follows. Please let us know any objections. Original: Optimized Ingress Replication Solution for Ethernet VPN (EVPN) Currently: Optimized Ingress Replication Solution for Ethernet VPNs (EVPNs) --> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in the title) for use on <https://www.rfc-editor.org/search>. --> 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 1: Does "as many copies of the frame as remote NVEs/PEs are attached" mean "as many copies of the frame as the number of remote NVEs/PEs that are attached"? If the suggested text is not correct, please clarify. Original: In the Ingress Replication approach, the ingress NVE receving a BUM frame from the Tenant System will create as many copies of the frame as remote NVEs/PEs are attached to the BD. Suggested ("receving" has been fixed): In the ingress replication approach, the ingress NVE receiving a BUM frame from the Tenant System (TS) will create as many copies of the frame as the number of remote NVEs/PEs that are attached to the BD. --> 4) <!-- [rfced] Section 1: We changed "NV3" to "NVE3" per Figure 1. If this is incorrect, please define "NV". Original: On the left-hand side, NVE1 uses Ingress Replication to send a BUM frame (originated from Tenant System TS1) to the remote nodes attached to the BD, i.e., NVE2, NV3, PE1. Currently: On the left-hand side of the diagram, NVE1 uses ingress replication to send a BUM frame (originated from Tenant System TS1) to the remote nodes attached to the BD, i.e., NVE2, NVE3, and PE1. --> 5) <!-- [rfced] Figure 1: Should the three instances of "to-G" be "to G1", in which case perhaps we should also change "To-WAN" to "To WAN")? (in other words, do these hyphenated entries mean "(from the) OIF to G" and "To (the) WAN"? Original: To-WAN ... OIF to-G ... --> 6) <!-- [rfced] Sections 1 and subsequent: We do not see the hyphenated form "Pruned-Flood-Lists" in any published RFCs to date. However, we see "Pruned Flood Lists (PFLs)" in RFC 9469. May we remove the hyphens? Also, RFC 9469 appears to be the only published RFC to date that uses "Flood List" (via case-insensitive search). Perhaps "Pruned Flooding Lists"? --> 7) <!-- [rfced] Sections 1 and subsequent: We see that RFC 6514 uses "Next Hop field" (no hyphen) and that the only published RFCs to date that use "Next-Hops" are RFCs 2749 and 5286. May we change instances of "Next-Hop" to "Next Hop" where it is used as a noun (e.g., "will set the Next-Hop to an IP address") and change instances of "Next-Hops" to "next hops" (per draft-ietf-bess-evpn-bum-procedure-updates and most published RFCs)? --> 8) <!-- [rfced] Section 2: We see that the list of terms is mostly alphabetized. Would you like the list to be alphabetized? --> 9) <!-- [rfced] Sections 2 and 6.1: These two instances of "destination IP AR-IP" read oddly. Should they be "destination AR-IP"? Are some words missing? Original: - Asisted Replication forwarding mode: for an AR-LEAF, it means sending an Attachment Circuit BM packet to a single AR-REPLICATOR with tunnel destination IP AR-IP. ... The tunnel destination IP AR-IP will be an indication for the remote Selective AR-REPLICATOR that the packet needs further replication to its AR-LEAFs. --> 10) <!-- [rfced] Section 3: For ease of the reader, we expanded "CE" as "Customer Edge". If this is incorrect, please provide the correct definition. Original: c. The solution is compatible with [RFC7432] and [RFC8365] and has no impact on the CE procedures for BM traffic. Currently: c. The solution is compatible with [RFC7432] and [RFC8365] and has no impact on the Customer Edge (CE) procedures for BM traffic. --> 11) <!-- [rfced] Sections 4 and 7: As this document discusses several solutions, which solution is referred to in these sentences - the ingress replication optimization solution in general or one of the solutions discussed in Sections 5 and 6? Original: This solution extends the [RFC7432] Inclusive Multicast Ethernet Tag routes and attributes so that an NVE/PE can signal its optimized Ingress Replication capabilities. ... In addition to AR, the second optimization supported by this solution is the ability for the all the BD nodes to signal Pruned-Flood-Lists (PFL). Possibly: The ingress replication optimization solution specified in this document extends the Inclusive Multicast Ethernet Tag routes and attributes described in [RFC7432] so that an NVE/PE can signal its optimized ingress replication capabilities. ... In addition to AR, the second optimization supported by the ingress replication optimization solution specified in this document is the ability of all the BD nodes to signal PFLs. --> 12) <!-- [rfced] Figure 2: We changed "Inclusive Multicast Tag" to "Inclusive Multicast Ethernet Tag" per "Inclusive Multicast Ethernet Tag route [RFC7432] is shown in Figure 2" in the paragraph just prior to the figure and "the above Inclusive Multicast Ethernet Tag route (Figure 2)" a few paragraphs later. If this is incorrect, please define this new term, which we don't see anywhere else in this document or in any published RFC except for RFC 9489. Original: Figure 2: EVPN Inclusive Multicast Tag Route's NLRI Currently: Figure 2: EVPN Inclusive Multicast Ethernet Tag Route's NLRI --> 13) <!-- [rfced] Sections 4 and 7: These sentences are difficult to follow. Does "prune-me" mean "prune me (from the indicated list)"? If yes, may we update as suggested? Original: o Broadcast and Multicast (BM) flag. BM=1 means "prune-me" from the BM flooding list. BM=0 means regular behavior. o Unknown (U) flag. U=1 means "prune-me" from the Unknown flooding list. U=0 means regular behavior. ... - BM is the Broadcast and Multicast flag. BM=1 means "prune-me" from the BM flood-list. BM=0 means regular behavior. - U is the Unknown flag. U=1 means "prune-me" from the Unknown flood-list. U=0 means regular behavior. Suggested (assuming that "flood-list" and "flooding list" mean the same thing): - Broadcast and Multicast (BM) flag. BM = 1 means "prune me from the BM flooding list". BM = 0 indicates regular behavior. - Unknown (U) flag. U = 1 means "prune me from the Unknown flooding list". U = 0 indicates regular behavior. ... * BM is the Broadcast and Multicast flag. BM = 1 means "prune me from the BM flooding list". BM = 0 indicates regular behavior. * U is the Unknown flag. U = 1 means "prune me from the Unknown flooding list". U = 0 indicates regular behavior. --> 14) <!-- [rfced] Section 4: The text in this paragraph was difficult to follow from the standpoint of whether some terms were field names or were used generally. We updated as follows. If this is incorrect, please provide clarifying text. Also, please note that per our previous question about "Next-Hop", we suggest removing the hyphen in the field name per more common usage in published RFCs. Original: + The Tunnel Identifier and Next-Hop SHOULD be set to the same IP address as the Originating Router's IP address when the NVE/PE originates the route, that is, when the NVE/PE is not an ASBR as in section 10.2 of [RFC8365]. Irrespective of the values in the Tunnel Identifier and Originating Router's IP Address fields, the ingress NVE/PE will process the received Replicator-AR route and will use the IP Address in the Next-Hop field to create IP tunnels to the AR- REPLICATOR. Currently: - The Tunnel Identifier and Next-Hop fields SHOULD be set to the same IP address as the Originating Router's IP Address field when the NVE/PE originates the route - that is, when the NVE/PE is not an ASBR; see Section 10.2 of [RFC8365]. Irrespective of the values in the Tunnel Identifier and Originating Router's IP Address fields, the ingress NVE/PE will process the received Replicator-AR route and will use the IP address setting in the Next-Hop field to create IP tunnels to the AR-REPLICATOR. --> 15) <!-- [rfced] Section 4: Per Section 11 and per "Tunnel Type MUST be set to Assisted-Replication Tunnel" used earlier in this section, we changed "set to AR" to "set to Assisted-Replication Tunnel". Please let us know any concerns. Original: o The Leaf Auto-Discovery route MUST include the PMSI Tunnel attribute with the Tunnel Type set to AR (Section 11), T (AR role type) set to AR-LEAF and the Tunnel Identifier set to the IP address of the advertising AR-LEAF. Currently: * The Leaf A-D route MUST include the PMSI Tunnel Attribute with Tunnel Type set to Assisted-Replication Tunnel (Section 11), T (AR role type) set to AR-LEAF, and Tunnel Identifier set to the IP address of the advertising AR-LEAF. --> 16) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.2: a) We see "Inclusive Multicast Ethernet Tag route" in RFC 7432 but not "inclusive multicast route" or "Inclusive Multicast Route". Will these distinctions be clear to readers, or should "Ethernet Tag" be added? Original: b. In this non-selective AR solution, the AR-LEAF MUST advertise a single Regular-IR inclusive multicast route as in [RFC7432]. ... c. In a BD where there are no AR-REPLICATORs due to the AR- REPLICATORs being down or reconfigured, the AR-LEAF MUST use regular Ingress Replication, based on the remote Regular-IR Inclusive Multicast Routes as described in [RFC7432]. ... The AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer SHOULD be configurable in seconds, and its value account for the time it takes for the AR-LEAF Regular-IR inclusive multicast route to get to the AR-REPLICATOR and be programmed. b) We had trouble following the meaning of "make any difference for" here. If the suggested text is not correct, please provide clarifying text. Original: Note that although this field does not make any difference for the remote nodes when creating an EVPN destination to the AR- LEAF, this field is useful for an easy operation and troubleshooting of the BD. Suggested: Note that although this field does not affect the remote nodes when creating an EVPN destination to the AR-LEAF, this field is useful from the standpoint of ease of operation and troubleshooting of the BD. --> 17) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.2: This sentence does not parse. Should "and its value account for" say "and its value SHOULD account for", "and its value needs to account for", or something else? In other words, to what does "SHOULD" apply in this sentence? Original: The AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer SHOULD be configurable in seconds, and its value account for the time it takes for the AR-LEAF Regular-IR inclusive multicast route to get to the AR-REPLICATOR and be programmed. --> 18) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.2: As it appears that "a matter of local policy" indicates whether or not to change to a new preferred AR-REPLICATOR (as opposed to always making the change), we updated this sentence accordingly. If this is incorrect, please provide clarifying text. Original: f. If the AR-LEAF has selected an AR-REPLICATOR, it is a matter of local policy to change to a new preferred AR-REPLICATOR for the existing BM traffic flows. Currently: f. If the AR-LEAF has selected an AR-REPLICATOR, whether or not to change to a new preferred AR-REPLICATOR for the existing BM traffic flows is a matter of local policy. --> 19) <!-- [rfced] Figure 5: We changed "LEAF-set1" to "LEAF-set-1", but is it correct to have two "LEAF-set-1"s in the diagram? In other words, are three distinct LEAF-sets shown here, or two? Original: | LEAF-set1 | |LEAF-set-1 | |LEAF-set-2 | Currently: |LEAF-set-1 | |LEAF-set-1 | |LEAF-set-2 | Possibly (if there should be three LEAF-sets): |LEAF-set-1 | |LEAF-set-2 | |LEAF-set-3 | --> 20) <!-- [rfced] Section 6: We found this sentence confusing, as it seems that the AR roles are defined more clearly in Section 5 than in Section 4. Should Section 5 also be cited here? Original: The same AR roles defined in Section 4 are used here, however the procedures are different. --> 21) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.1: This sentence is difficult to follow. May we update the text per item a. in Section 5.1? If not, please clarify "part of an Assisted-Replication-enabled BD as the AR role itself". Original: a. The Selective AR-REPLICATOR capability SHOULD be an administrative choice in any NVE/PE that is part of an Assisted- Replication-enabled BD, as the AR role itself. Suggested: a. The AR-REPLICATOR role SHOULD be an administrative choice in any NVE/PE that is part of an Assisted- Replication-enabled BD. --> 22) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.1: It seems odd to repeat "Replicator-AR route" in this sentence. May we update as suggested, or should the wording be revised? Original: o The Replicator-AR route MUST include L=1 (Leaf Information Required) in the Replicator-AR route. Suggested: * The Replicator-AR route MUST have the L flag set to 1. --> 23) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.1: This sentence does not parse. Does the "MUST" in this sentence also apply to "but skipping"? If the suggested text is not correct, please provide clarifying text. Original: o If the destination IP address matches its AR-IP and the source IP address does not match any IP address of its Selective AR- LEAF-set, the AR-REPLICATOR MUST forward the BM packet to flood-list #2 but skipping the AR-REPLICATOR-set. Non-BM overlay tunnels are skipped when sending BM packets. Suggested (assuming that "MUST" applies to both forwarding and skipping): - If the destination IP address matches its AR-IP and the source IP address does not match any IP address of its Selective AR- LEAF-set, the AR-REPLICATOR MUST forward the BM packet to flood-list #2, skipping the AR-REPLICATOR-set. Non-BM overlay tunnels are skipped when sending BM packets. --> 24) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.2: We updated this sentence per item a. in Section 5.2. If this is incorrect, please clarify "role selective capability". Original: a. The AR-LEAF role selective capability SHOULD be an administrative choice in any NVE/PE that is part of an Assisted-Replication- enabled BD. Currently: a. The AR-LEAF role SHOULD be an administrative choice in any NVE/PE that is part of an Assisted-Replication-enabled BD. --> 25) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.2: As the original text seemed to indicate that the AR-LEAF should wait for a timer, we updated the text to indicate that the AR-LEAF should wait for some interval to pass. If this is incorrect, please provide clarifying text (e.g., are some words missing?). Original: It is RECOMMENDED that the Selective AR-LEAF waits for an AR- LEAF-join-wait-timer (in seconds, default value is 3) before sending the Leaf Auto-Discovery route, so that the AR-LEAF can collect all the Replicator-AR routes for the BD before advertising the Leaf Auto-Discovery route. Currently: It is RECOMMENDED that the Selective AR-LEAF wait for a period specified by an AR-LEAF-join-wait-timer (in seconds, with a default value of 3) before sending the Leaf A-D route, so that the AR-LEAF can collect all the Replicator-AR routes for the BD before advertising the Leaf A-D route. --> 26) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.2: a) We changed "a timer AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer" to "an AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer", but we still find this sentence difficult to follow. Should "behavior for an AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer" be "behavior after a specified AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer interval"? If not, please provide clarifying text. Original: In case of failure of the active Selective AR- REPLICATOR, it is RECOMMENDED for the Selective AR-LEAF to revert to Ingress Replication behavior for a timer AR- REPLICATOR-activation-timer (in seconds, default value is 3) to mitigate the traffic impact. Currently: In the case of failure of the active Selective AR-REPLICATOR, it is RECOMMENDED that the Selective AR-LEAF revert to ingress replication behavior for an AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer (in seconds, with a default value of 3) to mitigate the traffic impact. b) Does "the same configurable parameter as in Section 5.2" mean "the same configurable parameter as the parameter discussed in Section 5.2", "the same configurable parameter, as discussed in Section 5.2", or something else? Please clarify. Original: The AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer MAY be the same configurable parameter as in Section 5.2. --> 27) <!-- [rfced] Section 7.1: As it appears that "the solution described in this document" refers to the PFLs solution and not to the Assisted-Replication solution as mentioned in Section 1 ("The Assisted-Replication solution described in this document") or the optimized ingress replication solution in general, we updated this sentence accordingly. If this is incorrect, please provide clarifying text. Original: In order to illustrate the use of the solution described in this document, we will assume that BD-1 in Figure 4 is optimized Ingress Replication enabled and: Currently: In order to illustrate the use of the PFLs solution, we will assume that BD-1 in Figure 4 is optimized ingress replication enabled and: --> 28) <!-- [rfced] Section 7.1: As it appears that "will reply ARP Requests" means "will reply to ARP Requests", we updated this sentence accordingly. If this is incorrect, please provide clarifying text. Original: Proxy-ARP [I-D.ietf-bess-evpn-proxy-arp-nd] on the remote NVE/PEs will reply ARP Requests locally, and no other Broadcast is expected. Currently: Proxy ARP [RFC9161] on the remote NVEs/PEs will reply to ARP Requests locally, and no other broadcast traffic is expected. --> 29) <!-- [rfced] Section 8: As it appears that "Ingress Replication or Assisted Replication forwarding mode" means "Ingress Replication forwarding mode or Assisted Replication forwarding mode" as opposed to "ingress replication or Assisted Replication forwarding mode", we updated this paragraph accordingly. If this is incorrect, please clarify the text. Original: - An AR-REPLICATOR will perform Ingress Replication or Assisted Replication forwarding mode for the incoming Overlay packets based on an ingress VNI lookup, as opposed to the tunnel IP DA lookup. Note that, when replicating to remote AR-REPLICATOR nodes, the use of the IR-VNI or AR-VNI advertised by the egress node will determine the Ingress Replication or Assisted Replication forwarding mode at the subsequent AR-REPLICATOR. Currently: * An AR-REPLICATOR will perform Ingress Replication forwarding mode or Assisted Replication forwarding mode for the incoming overlay packets based on an ingress VNI lookup as opposed to the tunnel IP DA lookup. Note that when replicating to remote AR-REPLICATOR nodes, the use of the IR-VNI or AR-VNI advertised by the egress node will determine whether Ingress Replication forwarding mode or Assisted Replication forwarding mode is used at the subsequent AR- REPLICATOR. --> 30) <!-- [rfced] Section 10: a) As it appears that the AR-LEAF nodes are the entities making selections (per "other AR-LEAFs' selections" in Section 5.2), we updated this sentence accordingly. If this is incorrect, please provide clarifying text. Original: Also, an attack on the AR-REPLICATOR and change of the advertised AR type will modify the selection on the AR- LEAF nodes. Currently: Also, an attack on the AR-REPLICATOR and any change to the advertised AR type will modify the selections made by the AR-LEAF nodes. b) We could not follow the meaning of "attracted" as used in this sentence. Per <https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/attracted>, it does not appear to be a good fit. Please provide alternative text. Original: The forwarding of Broadcast and Multicast (BM) traffic is modified, and BM traffic from the AR-LEAF nodes will be attracted by the existence of AR-REPLICATORs in the BD. --> 31) <!-- [rfced] Would you like to list the references in alphanumeric order? --> 32) <!-- [rfced] Please let us know if any changes are needed for the following: a) The following terms were used inconsistently in this document. We chose to use the latter forms. Please let us know any objections. flags field / Flags field (per Cluster 448) Ingress Replication / ingress replication (per RFCs 9251 and 9252) NVE/PEs / NVEs/PEs nvGRE (Figures 4 and 5) / NVGRE Originating Router's IP address / Originating Router's IP Addr / Originating Router's IP Address (per RFC 9252) PMSI Tunnel attribute / PMSI Tunnel Attribute (per RFC 9252) regular-IR (2 instances) / Regular-IR (24 instances) (We see one instance of "regular IR-IP Address"; please confirm that this is correct.) regular-IR behavior described in [RFC7432] (1 instance) / regular ingress replication behavior described in [RFC7432] (4 instances) Split-horizon / split-horizon (per RFC 9252) Tunnel Type / tunnel type (where used generally) b) The following terms appear to be used inconsistently in this document. Please let us know which form is preferred. AR-IP Address / AR-IP address Assisted-Replication / Assisted Replication (e.g., "Assisted-Replication (AR)", "Assisted Replication (AR)") (We suggest that, after selecting one form, we use the abbreviation "AR" after the initial definition in Section 1.) Assisted-Replication Type field (4 instances) / AR type field (1 instance) (Are these two distinct fields, or do they both mean the same thing? If the same, which form should be used?) core network / network core (Abstract) IP Source Address / source IP address* * (e.g., as used in RFC 9251) IR-IP Address / IR-IP address multi-staged / multi-stage non-selective / Non-selective / Non-Selective (in running text, e.g., 'non-selective AR', 'solution is called "non-selective"', 'Non-Selective solution', 'Non-selective AR-REPLICATORs', 'non-selective mode', 'Non-Selective and Selective modes', 'Non-Selective mode') Suggested (with the exception of 'Non-selective mode', per other mode names in this cluster): non-selective, because we do not see a precedent for 'Non-selective' in any published RFC. However, we see 'Non-Selective Mode' used once in RFC 9469, but this appears to be an outlier. selective AR(...) / Selective AR(...) (e.g., selective AR, selective AR-LEAF-set, Selective AR-LEAF-set, selective AR-REPLICATOR, Selective AR-REPLICATOR) Suggested: selective AR(...) Please note that we also see 'Selective solution' and 'Selective mode'. We suggest 'selective solution', because it does not appear to be a proper term. We suggest 'Selective mode' per other mode names in this cluster. Single-IP AR-REPLICATOR ("in the Single-IP AR-REPLICATOR ..." (Section 2)) / single-IP AR-REPLICATOR (Section 10) T (AR role type) (2 instances) / T (Assisted-Replication type) (1 instance) Unknown Unicast / Unknown unicast / unknown unicast (where used generally) c) This is the only document in Cluster 448 (https://www.rfc-editor.org/cluster_info.php?cid=C448) that uses "flood-list" (e.g., "Unknown flooding list", "Unknown flood-list"). We also could not find any instances of "flood-list", "Flood-List", or "Flood-list" in any published RFC to date. May we change these instances to "flooding list" as used elsewhere in this document, and also per draft-ietf-bess-evpn-bum-procedure-updates? If not, how can the distinction between these two terms be clarified for readers? --> 33) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide at <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>, and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice. --> Thank you. RFC Editor On Apr 10, 2024, at 3:41 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: *****IMPORTANT***** Updated 2024/04/10 RFC Author(s): -------------- Instructions for Completing AUTH48 Your document has now entered AUTH48. Once it has been reviewed and approved by you and all coauthors, it will be published as an RFC. If an author is no longer available, there are several remedies available as listed in the FAQ (https://www.rfc-editor.org/faq/). 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Thank you for your cooperation, RFC Editor -------------------------------------- RFC9574 (draft-ietf-bess-evpn-optimized-ir-12) Title : Optimized Ingress Replication Solution for Ethernet VPN (EVPN) Author(s) : J. Rabadan, Ed., S. Sathappan, W. Lin, M. Katiyar, A. Sajassi WG Chair(s) : Matthew Bocci, Stephane Litkowski, Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, John Scudder, Gunter Van de Velde
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