Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-17> for your review
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-17> for your review
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If everyone is fine with s/key-id/keyid/g, then I'm okay with all these changes. Thanks! (Random observation: I cannot figure when a trailing full stop (".") needs to be added to a description field and when it can be dropped. I couldn't detect any pattern.) On Fri, Jun 24, 2022 at 11:02 PM Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Megan, > > On Sat, Jun 25, 2022 at 3:07 AM Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> wrote: > >> Hi Dhruv, >> >> Apologies for the missed announcement message: this is a known tech issue >> on our end. >> >> Thank you for the reply. Prior to marking you as “Approved” on the >> AUTH48 status page, >> please review our updates and confirm we have interpreted your guidance >> correctly. >> Specifically, please review our updates to the table formatting and the >> updates to the >> Abstract/Introduction that also affect the YANG module. >> >> > The update to the tables looks good. > > One change in the YANG module description. Since you added "version 4", > perhaps we should also include the statement on v3. > CURRENT: > description > "This document defines a YANG data model that can be used > to configure and manage Network Time Protocol (NTP) version 4. > PROPOSE: > description > "This document defines a YANG data model that can be used > to configure and manage Network Time Protocol (NTP) version 4. > It can also be used to configure and manage version 3. > END > > In the YANG model, I suggest making this update in the reference clause. > OLD > reference > "FIPS 180-4: Secure Hash Standard (SHS)"; > NEW > reference > "SHS: Secure Hash Standard (SHS) (FIPS PUB 180-4)"; > END > > There are 5 instances! > > All other changes look good. Please note my approval for publication! > > Thanks! > Dhruv > > > >> The files have been posted here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9249.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9249.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9249.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9249.xml >> >> The relevant diff files have been posted here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9249-diff.html (cumulative >> htmlwdiff) >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9249-rfcdiff.html (cumulative >> diff side-by-side) >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9249-auth48diff.html (htmlwdiff >> of AUTH48 changes only) >> >> The AUTH48 status page for this document is viewable at >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9249. >> >> Thank you. >> >> RFC Editor/mf >> >> >> > On Jun 22, 2022, at 8:50 AM, Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> wrote: >> > >> > Hi Megan, >> > >> > Thanks for the editing. Please find my answers inline - >> > >> > >> > On Tue, Jun 21, 2022 at 6:28 PM Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> >> wrote: >> > Authors, >> > >> > We don’t believe we’ve heard back from you regarding this document’s >> readiness for publication. >> > >> > Please review both the AUTH48 announcement message and >> document-specific questions below and let >> > us know if we can be of service during your AUTH48 review. >> > >> > Thank you. >> > >> > RFC Editor/mf >> > >> > >> > > On Jun 10, 2022, at 3:07 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: >> > > >> > > Authors, >> > > >> > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as >> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. >> > > >> > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear >> in the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: NTPv4, NTPv3 >> > >> > >> > > >> > > 2) <!--[rfced] Is this YANG data model configuring NTP v3 itself? >> Please >> > > note that a similar sentence exists in the Introduction that >> > > should also be changed if an update is necessary. >> > > >> > > Current: >> > > It can also be used to configure version 3. >> > > >> > > Perhaps: >> > > It can also be used to configure implementations using version 3. >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: I think we should avoid using "implementations". The abstract >> could be - >> > >> > This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to >> > configure and manage Network Time Protocol (NTP) version 4. It can >> > also be used to configure and manage version 3. The data model >> > includes configuration data and state data. >> > >> > > >> > > 3) <!--[rfced] FYI, we have updated the first sentence of the >> Abstract and >> > > Introduction. Please review and let us know any concerns. >> > > >> > > Original (Abstract): >> > > This document defines a YANG data model for Network Time Protocol >> > > (NTP) version 4 implementations. >> > > >> > > Current: >> > > This document defines a YANG data model for implementations of the >> > > Network Time Protocol (NTP) version 4. >> > > >> > > >> > > Original (Intro): >> > > This document defines a YANG [RFC7950] data model for Network Time >> > > Protocol [RFC5905] implementations. >> > > >> > > Current: >> > > This document defines a YANG data model [RFC7950] for >> > > implementations of the Network Time Protocol version 4 [RFC5905]. >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: To avoid using the word implementation, the introduction can >> be changed to - >> > >> > This document defines a YANG data model [RFC7950] that can be used >> > to configure and manage Network Time Protocol version 4 [RFC5905]. >> > Note that the model could also be used to configure and manage >> > NTPv3 [RFC1305] (see Section 7). >> > >> > Let's make a similar change inside the YANG module in the description >> clause. >> > >> > >> > > >> > > 4) <!--[rfced] Regarding Tables 3, 4, and 5, for the ease of the >> reader, would >> > > you like to add text within each empty table cell (such as "[no >> equivalent]") >> > > or add a sentence before each table to be specific about the meaning >> of >> > > an empty cell? We are referring to these cells: >> > > >> > > Table 3: >> > > | | ntpEntStatusActiveRefSourceName | >> > > >> > > Table 4: >> > > | | ntpAssocAddress >> | >> > > >> > > Table 5: >> > > >> > > | | server/name | >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: The empty cell on left actually means that the clock-refid >> corresponds to both ntpEntStatusActiveRefSourceId and >> ntpEntStatusActiveRefSourceName. Similarly, address corresponds to >> ntpAssocAddressType and ntpAssocAddress. >> > >> > I don't think we can do a "merge cells" on the left? Maybe we put MIB >> objects together in one row then! What would be the best practice here? >> > >> > >> > >> > > >> > > 5) <!--[rfced] The following sentence is problematic in a few ways: >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > The access rules in this section refers to the on-the-wire access >> > > control to the NTP service and completely independent of any >> > > management API access control, e.g., NETCONF Access Control Model >> > > (NACM) ([RFC8341]). >> > > >> > > a) There is a subject/verb agreement issue between "access rules" and >> "refers". >> > > >> > > b) What is the subject of "completely independent of any management >> > > API access control": is text missing there? Please rephrase. >> > > >> > > Perhaps: >> > > The access rules in this section refer to the on-the-wire access >> > > control to the NTP service and are completely independent of any >> > > management API access control, e.g., NETCONF Access Control Model >> > > (NACM) [RFC8341]. >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Your rephrasing is perfect. >> > >> > > >> > > 6) <!--[rfced] May we make this change so that the first bulleted item >> > > is more similar to those that follow? Note - this change would also >> > > solve an issue based on the first clause not having a subject but >> > > the second clause using "it". >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > * Peer: Permit others to synchronize their time with the NTP entity >> > > or it can synchronize its time with others. NTP control queries >> > > are also accepted. >> > > >> > > Perhaps: >> > > * Peer: Permit others to synchronize their time with the NTP entity >> > > or vice versa. NTP control queries are also accepted. >> > > >> > > Note also that a similar edit could be made to the description clause >> that follows: >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > "Permit others to synchronize their time with this NTP >> > > entity or it can synchronize its time with others. >> > > >> > > Perhaps: >> > > "Permit others to synchronize their time with this NTP >> > > entity or vice versa. >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Your rephrasing is perfect. >> > >> > >> > >> > > >> > > 7) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions about text that appears >> > > inside the YANG module. >> > > >> > > a) We lowercased "Indicates" twice in text like the following. Please >> > > let us know any objections. >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > description >> > > "The signed time offset to the current selected reference >> > > time source, e.g., '0.032ms' or '1.232ms'. The negative >> > > value Indicates that the local clock is behind the >> > > current selected reference time source."; >> > > >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Ack >> > >> > >> > >> > > b) Please review the use of "dispersion" in the following text. >> > > (Is it accurate to say "dispersion between"?) >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > description >> > > "The dispersion between the local clock >> > > and the root clock, e.g., '6.927ms'."; >> > > >> > > For comparison, in RFC 5905, it says: >> > > Root Dispersion (rootdisp): Total dispersion to the reference clock, >> > > in NTP short format. >> > > >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Better to align with 5905 and use "to" instead of "between". >> > >> > >> > >> > > c) Please confirm that Peer should be capitalized in the following >> > > text. We guess this is referring to the access mode, but don't see >> > > any other instances of a capitalized "Peer" in the document. However, >> > > we do see the use of lowercase peer in quotes (see below). Please >> > > review and let us know if any updates should be made. >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > } >> > > container ntp-statistics { >> > > description >> > > "Per Peer packet send and receive statistics"; >> > > uses statistics { >> > > description >> > > "NTP send and receive packet statistics"; >> > > } >> > > >> > > >> > > Perhaps: >> > > "Per-peer statistics on packets sent and received"; >> > > ... >> > > "NTP statistics on packets sent and received"; >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: You can make Peer to lowercase. >> > There is no specific reason to highlight "Per-peer", thus I prefer the >> 2nd suggestion. >> > >> > >> > >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > This example describes how to configure access mode "peer" >> associated >> > > with ACL 2000 - >> > > >> > > Perhaps: >> > > This example describes how to configure "peer-access-mode" >> associated >> > > with ACL 2000 - >> > > >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Please go ahead with this change. >> > >> > >> > >> > > >> > > d) Please clarify this list (note that similar text occurs multiple >> > > times in the YANG module). >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > Discontinuities in the value of this counter can occur >> > > upon cold start or reinitialization of the NTP entity, the >> > > management system and at other times. >> > > >> > > Perhaps: >> > > Discontinuities in the value of this counter can occur >> > > upon cold start, reinitialization of the NTP entity or the >> > > management system, and at other times. >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Your rephrasing is correct. >> > >> > >> > >> > > e) Please review the use of "(mode 6)" in the text that follows. We >> > > note that 1) the text above it is very similar but does not mark >> > > "(mode 6)" 2) the previous 5 modes used "mode" in their names (for >> > > example, "server authentication mode (mode 4)", and 3) that >> > > "multicast-client" operates very similarly in the sentence, but has no >> > > mode designation. Please review and let us know if/how we should >> > > update. >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > >> > > identity broadcast-server { >> > > base association-mode; >> > > description >> > > "Use broadcast server mode (mode 5). >> > > This mode defines that its either working >> > > as broadcast-server or multicast-server."; >> > > } >> > > >> > > identity broadcast-client { >> > > base association-mode; >> > > description >> > > >> > > "This mode defines that its either working >> > > as broadcast-client (mode 6) or multicast-client."; >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Multicast-server and multicast-client do not get specific mode >> assigned as per - https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc5905#section-3 >> and repurpose the mode 5 and 6 and description is aligned to that! No >> update is needed. >> > >> > >> > >> > > >> > > 8) <!--[rfced] In the YANG module, is it intentional that the >> > > "contact" only includes the editors of the RFC? If so, that's fine. >> > > If not, may we update it to list each individual who is listed in >> > > the header of the RFC? >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: No preference, you can follow whatever is the best current >> practice. >> > >> > > >> > > 9) <!--[rfced] Please review comments left by authors in the XML and >> let >> > > us know if any further action is necessary or if these comments may be >> > > deleted.--> >> > > >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: can be deleted. >> > >> > >> > >> > > 10) <!--[rfced] Please review the use of "clock current state" in the >> > > following text: >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > This example describes how to get clock current state - >> > > >> > > Perhaps: >> > > This example describes how to get current clock state - >> > > --> >> > > >> > [Dhruv]: Make sense. >> > >> > >> > >> > > >> > > 11) <!--[rfced] FYI - we have moved several references from the >> > > "Informative References" section to the "Normative References" >> > > section per the guidance at >> > > https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines. >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: ok >> > >> > >> > >> > > >> > > 12) <!--[rfced] May we update the [SHS] reference entry to match what >> was >> > > used in RFC 9216 (2015 version instead of 2012)? >> > > >> > > Currently: >> > > [SHS] NIST, "Secure Hash Standard (SHS)", FIPS PUB 180-4, March >> > > 2012, <https://nvlpubs.nist.gov/nistpubs/fips/ >> > > nist.fips.180-4.pdf>. >> > > RFC 9216: >> > > [SHA] National Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST), >> > > "Secure Hash Standard (SHS)", FIPS PUB 180-4, >> > > DOI 10.6028/NIST.FIPS.180-4, August 2015, >> > > <https://doi.org/10.6028/NIST.FIPS.180-4>. >> > > --> >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Ok >> > >> > > >> > > 13) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, we had the following questions >> about terminology. Please review and let us know how you would like to >> proceed. >> > > >> > > a) How may we expand "KISS"? We note that RFC 5905 uses lowercase >> > > "kiss code". >> > > >> > > Original: >> > > It could be an IPv4 address or first 32 bits of the MD5 hash of the >> > > IPv6 address or a string for the Reference Identifier and KISS codes. >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: You can make it lowercase and follow RFC 5905. >> > >> > >> > >> > > b) The following terms appear to be used inconsistently. Please >> review and let us know if/how these terms should be made uniform. >> > > >> > > key-id vs. key id vs. keyid >> > [Dhruv]: keyid >> > > access-mode vs. access mode >> > [Dhruv]: access-mode >> > > local-mode vs. local mode >> > [Dhruv]: local-mode >> > > Authentication Key vs. authentication key >> > [Dhruv]: authentication key >> > >> > > Association vs. association >> > [Dhruv]: association >> > > >> > > c) We see variations in hyphenation in the following related terms. >> > > >> > > unicast server vs. unicast-server >> > > >> > >> > [Dhruv]: unicast server >> > >> > > (see also broadcast and multicast forms as well as client, for example >> > > multicast client vs. multicast-client) >> > >> > [Dhruv]: Inside the YANG the list name is multicast-client, but >> otherwise it is okay to use mulicast client. >> > >> > I have verified the diff and all rendering of the RFCs. 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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… rfc-editor
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Dhruv Dhody
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Dhruv Dhody
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Dhruv Dhody
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Erik Kline
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Dhruv Dhody
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Wunan(Eric,CloudBU)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Anil Kumar
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Ankit Kumar Sinha
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Yi Zhao Z
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9249 <draft-ietf-n… Karen Moore