Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9304 <draft-ietf-lisp-rfc8113bis-03> for your review

[[e-mail]]

Hello,

Please see inline.

[snip]

1) <!--[rfced] Throughout the text, "LISP Packet Types", "LISP Packet types", and "LISP packet types" are used inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how these may be made consistent.
-->  [CJ] "LISP Packet Types" is the preferred option.  


2) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice.
-->[CJ]  I have reviewed the "Inclusive Language" portion and also the NIST Table that provides examples of potentially biased language and I believe there is no need to change the text from this perspective.


Thank you.
[CJ] Thank you!

Christian.

RFC Editor/ap/ar


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RFC9304 (draft-ietf-lisp-rfc8113bis-03)

Title            : Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP): Shared Extension Message and IANA Registry for Packet Type Allocations
Author(s)        : M. Boucadair, C. Jacquenet
WG Chair(s)      : Joel M. Halpern, Luigi Iannone
Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston


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