Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-06.txt

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 11 March 2015 06:31 UTC

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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
To: 'Magnus Westerlund' <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>, 'IETF AVTCore WG' <avt@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-06.txt
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Magnus,
Small typo, In section 4.7 the reference at the end appears twice
Roni

> -----Original Message-----
> From: avt [mailto:avt-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Magnus Westerlund
> Sent: 02 March, 2015 11:37 PM
> To: IETF AVTCore WG
> Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action:
draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-
> 06.txt
> 
> WG,
> 
> This submission resolves the outstanding issues from the second WG last
call.
> 
> - Consistent usage of "endpoint"
> 
> - Addressing Scarlet's comments in Section 4.5
> 
> - Making references to individual drafts in Section 4.7 more clearly state
that
> this is work in progress.
> 
> - Moving some documents from normative to informative part of the
reference
> list.
> 
> I think this document can now be publication requested. But, please check
the
> modifications.
> 
> Cheers
> 
> Magnus
> 
> 
> On 2015-03-02 22:30, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> >  This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance
> Working Group of the IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : RTP Topologies
> >         Authors         : Magnus Westerlund
> >                           Stephan Wenger
> > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-06.txt
> > 	Pages           : 46
> > 	Date            : 2015-03-02
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    This document discusses point to point and multi-endpoint topologies
> >    used in Real-time Transport Protocol (RTP)-based environments.  In
> >    particular, centralized topologies commonly employed in the video
> >    conferencing industry are mapped to the RTP terminology.
> >
> >    This document is updated with additional topologies and replaces RFC
> >    5117.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-upd
> > ate/
> >
> > There's also a htmlized version available at:
> > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-06
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-upd
> > ate-06
> >
> >
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