Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking-15.txt

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Fri, 28 July 2023 16:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking-15.txt
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Hi, thanks for this revision.

Section 2 still needs to be fixed to use the updated BCP 14 text.  See RFC
8174 (and add it as a normative reference).

-MSK

On Wed, Jul 26, 2023 at 12:48 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Audio/Video
> Transport
> Core Maintenance (AVTCORE) WG of the IETF.
>
>    Title           : Video Frame Marking RTP Header Extension
>    Authors         : Mo Zanaty
>                      Espen Berger
>                      Suhas Nandakumar
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking-15.txt
>    Pages           : 16
>    Date            : 2023-07-26
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes a Video Frame Marking RTP header extension
>    used to convey information about video frames that is critical for
>    error recovery and packet forwarding in RTP middleboxes or network
>    nodes.  It is most useful when media is encrypted, and essential when
>    the middlebox or node has no access to the media decryption keys.  It
>    is also useful for codec-agnostic processing of encrypted or
>    unencrypted media, while it also supports extensions for codec-
>    specific information.
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking-15
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking-15
>
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