Re: [AVTCORE] Magnus Westerlund's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: James Sandford <james.sandford@bbc.co.uk>, Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>
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Hi,

I see that you have now added text on protection of packet loss. But, you just list a number of different mechanisms, without mandating (or even recommending) one of them - you just say that implementations must support *A* mechanism. But, that is most likely going to cause interoperability problems, if different implementations support different mechanisms.

Regards,

Christer

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Magnus Westerlund's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Changes have been submitted in -05. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml/

Regards,
James

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From: Magnus Westerlund [magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com]
Sent: 29 October 2019 14:13
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Magnus Westerlund's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Hi James,

Looks good to me.

Thanks,

Magnus


On Tue, 2019-10-29 at 13:52 +0000, James Sandford wrote:
> Thank you for your further comments.
>
> I will make the suggested changes to Section 8 and Section 11.1.
>
> With regards to further clarifying the fragmentation of documents, I propose
> the following:
>
> Section 6 OLD:
>   If a TTML document is assessed to be invalid then it MUST be discarded. When
> processing a valid document, the following requirements apply.
>
> Section 6 NEW:
>   If a TTML document is assessed to be invalid then it MUST be discarded. This
> includes empty documents, i.e. those of zero length. When processing a valid
> document, the following requirements apply.
>
> Section 8 ADDITIONAL PARAGRAPH:
>   As described in Section 6, only zero or one TTML document may be active at
> any point in time.  As such, there MUST only be one document transmitted for a
> given RTP Timestamp.  Furthermore, as stated in Section 4.1, the Marker Bit
> MUST be set for a packet containing the last fragment of a document.  A packet
> following one where the Marker Bit is set contains the first fragment of a new
> document.  The first fragment might also be the last.
>
>
> Regards,
> James
>
>
> ==========
> James Sandford
> R&D Project Engineer
>
> BBC Research and Development
> 5th Floor
> Dock House
> MediaCityUK
> Salford
> M50 2LH
>
> Tel: 030304 (09549)
> Web: http://www.bbc.co.uk/rd
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> ________________________________________
> From: Magnus Westerlund [magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com]
> Sent: 29 October 2019 11:47
> To: James Sandford; iesg@ietf.org
> Cc: avtcore-chairs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml@ietf.org;
> avt@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: [AVTCORE] Magnus Westerlund's Discuss on draft-ietf-payload-rtp-
> ttml-03: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>
> Hi James,
>
> Thanks for the  many updates in -04. However, I think there are a couple of
> adjustments still needed.
>
> Section 8:
>
> When a document spans more than one RTP packet, the entire document
> is obtained by concatenating User Data Words from each contributing
> packet in ascending order of Sequence Number.
>
> I think this can be further clarified by adding "consecutive"
>
> When a document spans more than one RTP packet, the entire document
> is obtained by concatenating User Data Words from each consecutive
> contributing
> packet in ascending order of Sequence Number.
>
> What I think is unclear is what is considered contributing packets. It is
> quite common that one determine fragments based on timestamp and that may be
> assumed by some. I don't know if that is a dangerous assumption here. To my
> understanding one can determine the set of fragments by looking at the
> marker bit for the packets. From first 0 after a 1, until and including the
> packet with a m=1. If that is your intention for how one should do it, so
> that it works for multiple documents to share epoch and thus RTP timestamp
> documents I think this needs to be made explicit.
>
> In section 11.1 it says:
>
> In these situations, it is RECOMMENDED that streams use
> the same Synchronization Source and Clock Rate as the related media.
>
> You do need to insert "Time" before Synchronization source to not be
> misinterpret to mean SSRC. Or maybe better is to say "clock source".
>
> Cheers
>
> Magnus Westerlund
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