Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-09.txt

[Magnus Westerlund <[e-mail]>]

Hi Paul,

Thanks, I will roll a new version. Version numbers are cheap.

/Magnus

Paul Kyzivat skrev den 2015-07-02 03:57:
> I have one *very* minor nit in the new text:
>
>     ... The Point to Multipoint
>     Using the RFC 3550 Mixer Model (Section 3.6) has been significantly
>     expanded and cover two different versions ...
>
> To make the language read right, I suggest one of the following two
> changes:
>
> s/and cover/and covers/
>
> or
>
> s/and cover/to cover/
>
> Or you can just wait for the professional editor to tweak it.
>
>      Thanks,
>      Paul
>
> On 6/30/15 7:32 AM, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
>> WG,
>>
>> This document was approved last Thursday, but there was a comment about
>> making clear what the changes are. Thus, I have added the following
>> paragraph in the Introduction section:
>>
>>     The new topologies are Point to Point via Middlebox (Section 3.2),
>>     Source Specific Multicast (Section 3.3.2), SSM with Local Unicast
>>     Resources (Section 3.3.3), Point to Multipoint Using Mesh
>>     (Section 3.4), Selective Forwarding Middlebox (Section 3.7), and
>>     Split Component Terminal (Section 3.10).  The Point to Multipoint
>>     Using the RFC 3550 Mixer Model (Section 3.6) has been significantly
>>     expanded and cover two different versions namely Media Mixing Mixer
>>     (Section 3.6.1), and Media Switching (Section 3.6.2).
>>
>> I hope none have an issue with this. If you do, you better raise it
>> quickly.
>>
>> Cheers
>>
>> Magnus
>> (as editor)
>>
>>
>> [e-mail] skrev den 2015-06-30 13:30:
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> directories.
>>>   This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core
>>> Maintenance Working Group of the IETF.
>>>
>>>          Title           : RTP Topologies
>>>          Authors         : Magnus Westerlund
>>>                            Stephan Wenger
>>>     Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-09.txt
>>>     Pages           : 46
>>>     Date            : 2015-06-30
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>     This document discusses point to point and multi-endpoint topologies
>>>     used in Real-time Transport Protocol (RTP)-based environments.  In
>>>     particular, centralized topologies commonly employed in the video
>>>     conferencing industry are mapped to the RTP terminology.
>>>
>>>     This document is updated with additional topologies and replaces RFC
>>>     5117.
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update/
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-09
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-09
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>>> submission
>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>>
>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>>
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>>>
>>
>>
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