Re: [AVTCORE] WGLC on RTP Payload for TTML Timed Text - nits

"Roni Even (A)" <roni.even@huawei.com> Tue, 24 September 2019 11:42 UTC

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From: "Roni Even (A)" <roni.even@huawei.com>
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Hi,
I noticed one nit


In section 7.2 "The "codecs" parameter MUST be included in the SDP file" maybe change to "The "codecs" parameter MUST be included in the a=fmtp line"

No need to do it now.

I will send the document to publication so there may be other comments that will require a new revision.



Roni Even



From: payload [mailto:payload-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Roni Even (A)
Sent: Thursday, June 27, 2019 9:25 AM
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Subject: [payload] WGLC on RTP Payload for TTML Timed Text

Hi,
I would like to start a three week WGLC on   in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-02.
The WGLC will end on July 18th

The document was also discussed in W3C TTWG.

Please review and send feedback even if it will say that there are no comments.


Roni Even
Payload WG co-chair