[AVTCORE] Draft Publication Request for draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-evc
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Subject: [AVTCORE] Draft Publication Request for draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-evc
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Request for Publication Document: RTP Payload Format for Essential Video Coding (EVC) Link: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-evc Intended Status: Proposed Standard Document Shepard: Bernard Aboba # Document Shepherd Write-Up for Group Documents *This version is dated 4 July 2022.* Thank you for your service as a document shepherd. Among the responsibilities is answering the questions in this write-up to give helpful context to Last Call and Internet Engineering Steering Group ([IESG][1]) reviewers, and your diligence in completing it is appreciated. The full role of the shepherd is further described in [RFC 4858][2]. You will need the cooperation of the authors and editors to complete these checks. Note that some numbered items contain multiple related questions; please be sure to answer all of them. ## Technical and Working Group Summary Technical Summary: This document describes the RTP payload format for the Essential Video Coding (EVC) standard, published as ISO/IEC 23094-1. The RTP payload format, which is applicable to video conferencing, video streaming and high-bitrate entertainment-quality video, allows for packetization of Network Abstraction Layer (NAL) units in an RTP packet payload as well as fragmentation of a NAL unit into multiple RTP packets. EVC inherits the basic systems and transport interfaces designs from VVC, HEVC and AVC. These include the NAL-unit-based syntax structure, the hierarchical syntax and data unit structure and the Supplemental Enhancement Information (SEI) message mechanism. However, EVC supports a subset of VVC feature set. For example, EVC supports temporal but not spatial or quality scalability. Working Group Summary: The EVC payload specification closely resembles the RTP payload specification for VVC (RFC 9328), so discussion in the WG focused on the differences between the EVC and VVC codecs and the impact on the RTP payload format. ## Document History 1. Does the working group (WG) consensus represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or did it reach broad agreement? WG consensus behind this document appears solid. A summary of the WGLC was posted to the AVTCORE mailing list on May 2, 2023: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/9KnvogwIX6Wi77VtYNmV3Sjfhik/ 5 responses were received to the WGLC announcement, all supporting publication. There were no objections. 2. Was there controversy about particular points, or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? The EVC RTP payload format is derived from RFC 9328, the VVC RTP payload format. Since the WG previously came to consensus on RFC 9328, the development of the EVC payload format went smoothly. 3. Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) No appeal threats or extreme discontent expressed. 4. For protocol documents, are there existing implementations of the contents of the document? Have a significant number of potential implementers indicated plans to implement? Are any existing implementations reported somewhere, either in the document itself (as [RFC 7942][3] recommends) or elsewhere (where)? Tencent has developed a prototype of the EVC RTP payload format, which is almost identical to the media plane of RFC 9328. See: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/2ihJhUi4OKaj80RrUAeW_6lt5LI/ There are no known implementation of the SDP signaling. So far, there have not been any interop events relating to the EVC RTP payload specification. ## Additional Reviews 5. Do the contents of this document closely interact with technologies in other IETF working groups or external organizations, and would it therefore benefit from their review? Have those reviews occurred? If yes, describe which reviews took place. The EVC RTP payload format document is based on the EVC specification developed in ISO. The authors of the EVC payload format include the IETF liaison to SC29 (Stephan Wenger) so there has been close coordination. 6. Describe how the document meets any required formal expert review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, YANG Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. The document does not define any MIBs, YANG modules or URIs. It does include a Media Type Registration in Section 7.1. This is based on the Media Type Registration in RFC 9328, so it has started from a stable foundation. 7. If the document contains a YANG module, has the final version of the module been checked with any of the [recommended validation tools][4] for syntax and formatting validation? If there are any resulting errors or warnings, what is the justification for not fixing them at this time? Does the YANG module comply with the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) as specified in [RFC 8342][5]? No YANG module. 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, CBOR's CDDL, etc. No formal languages are used in this specification. ## Document Shepherd Checks 9. Based on the shepherd's review of the document, is it their opinion that this document is needed, clearly written, complete, correctly designed, and ready to be handed off to the responsible Area Director? The document is motivated by the desire to offer a royalty-free codec utilizing some of the technology developed in VVC. That goal seems useful if it can be achieved (see the IPR concerns, below). The approach to RTP packetization utilized by EVC has been previously applied in the VVC, HEVC and AVC RTP payload specifications, so that the design is well understood. As the design has evolved from the AVC specification to HEVC and VVC, the approach has been simplified with infrequently used options being eliminated, reducing implementation complexity and improving interoperability. This trend continues with EVC, which offers a limited feature set compared with VVC (e.g. support for temporal scalability, but not spatial or quality). 10. Several IETF Areas have assembled [lists of common issues that their reviewers encounter][6]. For which areas have such issues been identified and addressed? For which does this still need to happen in subsequent reviews? None of the issues detailed in [6] apply to this document, other than Media Type registration. 11. What type of RFC publication is being requested on the IETF stream ([Best Current Practice][12], [Proposed Standard, Internet Standard][13], [Informational, Experimental or Historic][14])? Why is this the proper type of RFC? Do all Datatracker state attributes correctly reflect this intent? Publication as a Proposed Standard is requested. This is reflected in Datatracker. RFC 9328, which is closely related to this document, was also published as a Proposed Standard. 12. Have reasonable efforts been made to remind all authors of the intellectual property rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in [BCP 79][7]? To the best of your knowledge, have all required disclosures been filed? If not, explain why. If yes, summarize any relevant discussion, including links to publicly-available messages when applicable. On June 16, 2023 a request for author confirmation was posted to the AVTCORE WG mailing list: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/-lVJ9hRTn0Y7iz369pW88N6jy-4/ A response was received from each of the authors: Stephan Wenger: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/Eqb8TWcVzaOaBTmr9-op65UQXFY/ Shuai Zhao: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/oZceElHTOKvifqThAl5gCczHQlY/ Youngkwon Lim: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/fH6_1ES0kl3u8QAqksOpiGzS9Ms/ An IPR declaration has been filed: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?submit=draft&id=draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-evc As noted in draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-evc Section 1: "The Essential Video Coding [EVC] standard, which is formally designated as ISO/IEC International Standard 23094-1 [ISO23094-1] has been published in 2020. One goal of MPEG is to keep [EVC]'s Baseline profile essentially royalty-free by using technologies published more than 20 years ago or otherwise known to be available for use without a requirement for paying royalties, whereas more advanced profiles follow a reasonable and non-discriminatory licensing terms policy." Given the EVC development goals, the filing of an IPR declaration is a potential concern. On June 16, 2023 the AVTCORE WG was solicited as to whether wished to continue to proceed to publication: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/JUDZDgW31xjHMO-kMb6NSr-Buj0/ Responses from the authors indicated a willingness to proceed: Stephan Wenger: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/f5H_Sqz3bSzMGFWccNosnrmnYGk/ Shuai Zhao: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/IVFbH1nb6aPjmByc-hX7VEwemhA/ Youngkwon Ling: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/CQLmSbVscmFBNtEeLs94qNph9FQ/ Roman Chernyak: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/Tp81f2zPTyj8ikOC3SMcPUWc9H0/ No objections to publication were received on the AVTCORE WG mailing list. The issue will also be brought up at the IETF 117 AVTCORE WG meeting. 13. Has each author, editor, and contributor shown their willingness to be listed as such? If the total number of authors and editors on the front page is greater than five, please provide a justification. On June 26, 2023 I posted a message to the AVTCORE WG mailing list, requesting the agreement of authors, editors and contributor to be listed as such: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/GpbLyMJVRu0cf44MGbp9DZbEm84/ The authors and acknowledged contributors have affirmed their willingness to be listed: Stephan Wenger: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/AGKjtH5idZThJ6HPvK3teig7gJw/ Youngkwon Lim: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/zPbyT2GXAGgtWPsZ0maVM5hZ1Gc/ Shuai Zhao: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/9opVmOWsRFlCknrp6fw9l789_Jk/ Roman Chernyak: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/CPGFxFs5aS8z93DQY2LDqQzSiSM/ 14. Document any remaining I-D nits in this document. Simply running the [idnits tool][8] is not enough; please review the ["Content Guidelines" on authors.ietf.org][15]. (Also note that the current idnits tool generates some incorrect warnings; a rewrite is underway.) An ID nits check run on -04 discloses 0 errors, 0 flaws and 1 warning. Section 12 has two spelling errors: Large parts of this specification share text with the RTP payload format for VVC [RFC9328]. Roman Chernyak is thanksed for his s/thansked/thanked/ valueable review comments. We thank the authors of that s/valueable/valuable/ 15. Should any informative references be normative or vice-versa? See the [IESG Statement on Normative and Informative References][16]. The normative and informative references appear to be appropriate. 16. List any normative references that are not freely available to anyone. Did the community have sufficient access to review any such normative references? The EVC RTP Payload format has a normative reference to the EVC specification, "ISO/IEC 23094-1 Essential Video Coding", 2020, < https://www.iso.org/standard/57797.html> This specification is behind a paywall. However, to assist reviewers interested in the specification, Stephan Wenger (IETF liaison to SC29) has worked with ISO/IEC to make the specification free of charge to reviewers requesting it: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/HmTrkqKQFr406LLjAYFfZ0MODvI/ To test the process, I have requested the specification and it has been provided to me. 17. Are there any normative downward references (see [RFC 3967][9] and [BCP 97][10]) that are not already listed in the [DOWNREF registry][17]? If so, list them. No. 18. Are there normative references to documents that are not ready to be submitted to the IESG for publication or are otherwise in an unclear state? If so, what is the plan for their completion? There are no normative references to documents in an unclear state. 19. Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? If so, does the Datatracker metadata correctly reflect this and are those RFCs listed on the title page, in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If not, explain why and point to the part of the document where the relationship of this document to these other RFCs is discussed. The document does not change the status of any existing RFC. 20. Describe the document shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. Confirm that all aspects of the document requiring IANA assignments are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that each newly created IANA registry specifies its initial contents, allocations procedures, and a reasonable name (see [RFC 8126][11]). The IANA considerations section, which includes the Media Registration, is based on RFC 9325, albeit with a smaller range of options and parameters. 21. List any new IANA registries that require Designated Expert Review for future allocations. Are the instructions to the Designated Expert clear? Please include suggestions of designated experts, if appropriate. 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