IETF Logo Mail Archive

Re: [AVTCORE] [avtcore] nits of draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Thu, 14 February 2019 12:32 UTC

Return-Path: <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
X-Original-To: avt@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: avt@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 746DE13107D for <avt@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 14 Feb 2019 04:32:04 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.3
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.3 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.001, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=ericsson.com header.b=TpwW1lkM; dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=ericsson.com header.b=WKwlnuxb
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id pKIR37JeJLtn for <avt@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 14 Feb 2019 04:31:58 -0800 (PST)
Received: from sessmg22.ericsson.net (sessmg22.ericsson.net [193.180.251.58]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CF54212F1A2 for <avt@ietf.org>; Thu, 14 Feb 2019 04:31:57 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=ericsson.com; s=mailgw201801; c=relaxed/relaxed; q=dns/txt; i=@ericsson.com; t=1550147516; x=1552739516; h=From:Sender:Reply-To:Subject:Date:Message-ID:To:CC:MIME-Version:Content-Type: Content-Transfer-Encoding:Content-ID:Content-Description:Resent-Date:Resent-From: Resent-Sender:Resent-To:Resent-Cc:Resent-Message-ID:In-Reply-To:References:List-Id: List-Help:List-Unsubscribe:List-Subscribe:List-Post:List-Owner:List-Archive; bh=IHwDmV+xVBXC9UgzEyFJhJBNUlGA0N+2eQTJs8qGj08=; b=TpwW1lkMXkaGa4zwDeaDDsSlLQqLL+DutXUShvw4h2mQ/hSoyRtXWpHY27DW7A2P nKIyCBQVOMRbNIEdlykLC8hF2BFy97oH5bHZBJVr3NMLnmfJiFn5TO0W1oRmEzWb 0qToa1og35UdKcJMaODIg2ob70qwL1DxIIg6GJmFzP4=;
X-AuditID: c1b4fb3a-167ff7000000672c-f0-5c655fbcfe4a
Received: from ESESSMB505.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [153.88.183.123]) by sessmg22.ericsson.net (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id 83.29.26412.CBF556C5; Thu, 14 Feb 2019 13:31:56 +0100 (CET)
Received: from ESESBMB505.ericsson.se (153.88.183.172) by ESESSMB505.ericsson.se (153.88.183.166) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_128_CBC_SHA256_P256) id 15.1.1466.3; Thu, 14 Feb 2019 13:31:55 +0100
Received: from EUR04-VI1-obe.outbound.protection.outlook.com (153.88.183.157) by ESESBMB505.ericsson.se (153.88.183.172) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_128_CBC_SHA256_P256) id 15.1.1466.3 via Frontend Transport; Thu, 14 Feb 2019 13:31:55 +0100
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=ericsson.com; s=selector1; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-SenderADCheck; bh=IHwDmV+xVBXC9UgzEyFJhJBNUlGA0N+2eQTJs8qGj08=; b=WKwlnuxbsBX79Hwa3Pl6zNtl/sv6o0Ka74YP3Nd74BEHGRzHBLkAn51DYiHFv2RDaogdIeGbTzjibeqEef7Wgim9pRz4fuXZHiV/k/gMQWoYFJ4enRYtEHneYRhagvSVolsRSnS7nBMge1PN4BVlaQriiWClCL3sUrs08urcZFg=
Received: from DB6PR0701MB2517.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com (10.168.76.146) by DB6PR0701MB2903.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com (10.168.83.10) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.20.1622.12; Thu, 14 Feb 2019 12:31:54 +0000
Received: from DB6PR0701MB2517.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::24e9:f047:b58:5e]) by DB6PR0701MB2517.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::24e9:f047:b58:5e%7]) with mapi id 15.20.1622.016; Thu, 14 Feb 2019 12:31:54 +0000
From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
To: "Huangyihong (Rachel)" <rachel.huang@huawei.com>, "draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines@ietf.org>
CC: "avt@ietf.org" <avt@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [avtcore] nits of draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines
Thread-Index: AdTDZv/Z2ioXGLp7QaKfqkq7L3wcbQ==
Date: Thu, 14 Feb 2019 12:31:54 +0000
Message-ID: <DB6PR0701MB25176963957AE04BC254F27C95670@DB6PR0701MB2517.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com>
References: <51E6A56BD6A85142B9D172C87FC3ABBBAEFA3006@DGGEML532-MBX.china.huawei.com>
Accept-Language: sv-SE, en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [192.176.1.88]
x-ms-publictraffictype: Email
x-ms-office365-filtering-correlation-id: ff7c8fae-c4fc-4397-4d3d-08d69278672e
x-microsoft-antispam: BCL:0; PCL:0; RULEID:(2390118)(7020095)(4652040)(8989299)(4534185)(4627221)(201703031133081)(201702281549075)(8990200)(5600110)(711020)(4605077)(2017052603328)(7153060)(7193020); SRVR:DB6PR0701MB2903;
x-ms-traffictypediagnostic: DB6PR0701MB2903:
x-ms-exchange-purlcount: 1
x-microsoft-exchange-diagnostics: 1; DB6PR0701MB2903; 23:vltM9x724PiJWx+HhFFyZL1M/2S3Qb3zO6HYoHAh10DFZ6Sd0jTC30VWVjfPO32qEnSkHFJ4exgwb6UgFl/33hq5zGwMuttWX7cTuj8z1JonEQxGs/r7XXqpHIeS0xdhvJVs65Us4zm9+lvgCAWMLUxqwS9QKLLj03XMITAqqQLnkENyl8OYMU+3yFg4kF9YuzmZvGAS1xM3jgE2TtagimI0Gzmjuc0EFW3Rebowuj0mqXFQD79hRwLuehQdo+N1W4cO4sAe9zGsXcIxkxajx6dbOprch9J+ZpgGW2BhktJ0DMRD5Q4sDw1wfnK5yJJgxUJGQSjVqwNiHwE24W0C4az6K5J0DWdymoBo/kPv+nIBuDg4XMCUr40zmux680ao8cur4TpiiyeIg09o9szlGGc+MaWtvptB6ycLRkRVLh5FYOGYXchN84hOdrxZRHEMo9S2Qft7Gm5qIeMkYiiwnmFyt1fJ29Mzo4wxXp6jt7BcUkwybV0SY4EUT2lQ5r1knOFV4BC9kEjPPsmprSj6GKiR5AyR//gGUdZGLi/N0HTrGXwAhDP2OsyaeQg+DocKe8sRXjAOjtywpgoxL8Zt8UPLTwjD5VjqMbZP6UZ4NHOmb4DXllz+IHvqmTUprlTcnnGWPUcwkmrdKUGe0SNSzN6Uq6aVImwMA38C/oE73LWfrs39p6c807ybp0+bzJZ632l7WRh5Vz/awShEwUjXl3XTk49DR5yCCp5qHgBHUbd0DLjbBDm7ttKtkrTRSiZsPlB+iYwRTwW/F/XOS2dX4hljCYYttQ1dcQAPEVbB3kzx9BkaHsq+8y2huFJ6DjUXOODK3jJsPMduj5NkTc27gw3MUMXzKJsIxCWqj3w3pES/rXYpb+3TP5IuuzyySmrLoN9Laaut3ZCrB7Zu4oxTUSJblwZm78LM76bSSFxY3KbwcjjJ2+oNfdrj3zCWnHqFLRU6o41O6BVap9i9dRxm9Lai/qFb/T037V6+jffMel++OtLP4o0MS7+FHvwlu9DLp+9AntdNP3AjM+S8UNp/NKP56mXpS0+zaaoytji5eNz5abpKWgy+Srrh4wCwe+isDotrT6O6zc1rIQ1lHHKHCyKZIclk7qedwTMdONncXfL8ZF3/lKxnUBc9NIvwffMdq6yHXGYujTI1UDwl7pxiWcbHYACiG7Ckfew6zwbUFQVoeRPIo1aZNj3CsvEnTFXLRUdSyYUi3+erVsbwXDhyTytGdQdveSnkc+8s3vGqcILA4U5Nx/bjCdfTZ0RNWRSFcKXA8UToVmyafLlDnzSz4Q==
x-microsoft-antispam-prvs: <DB6PR0701MB2903D30072FA39ADCF3EDAC295670@DB6PR0701MB2903.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com>
x-forefront-prvs: 09480768F8
x-forefront-antispam-report: SFV:NSPM; SFS:(10009020)(366004)(396003)(39860400002)(346002)(136003)(376002)(189003)(199004)(26005)(9686003)(44832011)(4326008)(476003)(486006)(446003)(236005)(66066001)(54896002)(606006)(25786009)(2906002)(97736004)(186003)(102836004)(76176011)(71200400001)(6346003)(7696005)(99286004)(256004)(6306002)(8936002)(478600001)(966005)(14454004)(81166006)(8676002)(81156014)(2501003)(71190400001)(68736007)(33656002)(790700001)(105586002)(110136005)(53546011)(3846002)(6506007)(7736002)(74316002)(316002)(6116002)(229853002)(6436002)(55016002)(86362001)(6246003)(106356001)(53936002); DIR:OUT; SFP:1101; SCL:1; SRVR:DB6PR0701MB2903; H:DB6PR0701MB2517.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com; FPR:; SPF:None; LANG:en; PTR:InfoNoRecords; MX:1; A:1;
received-spf: None (protection.outlook.com: ericsson.com does not designate permitted sender hosts)
authentication-results: spf=none (sender IP is ) smtp.mailfrom=magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com;
x-ms-exchange-senderadcheck: 1
x-microsoft-antispam-message-info: UYHp9ZF3gNOuCirreTC2gsh5ppOzCPXLP9I0QGlRw7zIZxBvR82ZdMeVmnTI7lVKVRBPzlnvlQIrShWfopolzRRQqKLzN5oXAqXGCVlCDdyZi3xFhQFa85eFH3QkNEP3OuPFoCBQJtgmY+LWab1G6Ut39tZT6V6PP3MZj1bh9M4zKACDLXuAvI0oREHG02gBQ+wxADhDyCYEyLsyYZ9Luojh+m8RBpquqQx5srcbE5xD+FfrHBCo60IdLz18653lXHKRB7+2DE2HF+KFXf/1MMELnBh4wN1rFkvezG0fuTN39sQlCPEo3gHV/7LEEuaed4RYOoQEwdH67dAWjVMZJ8/A1+DIelfWWGwc5K4NsFRSG7ieoaWbli0Kxv7icI0Mhx0DCZj64AggaCtqD3RAcxLGsRBP17C2Z2tLDE+1Gf8=
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_DB6PR0701MB25176963957AE04BC254F27C95670DB6PR0701MB2517_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: ff7c8fae-c4fc-4397-4d3d-08d69278672e
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 14 Feb 2019 12:31:54.4082 (UTC)
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: 92e84ceb-fbfd-47ab-be52-080c6b87953f
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED
X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: DB6PR0701MB2903
X-OriginatorOrg: ericsson.com
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA02SfSzUcRzH9/39fnf3o86+LvIheritNg8hq01WDX/Eeli2UmkWt/ziwtHv J1LTaBrpweMM1Y52JRVbdhND46ZyUY3WJZpjHvKQhxRCs9x9tfnv9Xm/Pw/v7/ZlaVmVyIFV qhI4XqWIkYstmeLTL6/ubAjjQj3rDKz36O0KifdIRg3t/ejmO4kvHZjeMiEK1GgWqCDqjOW+ CC5GmcjxHgfCLaOW5yLje/wvz1ePMKlo0icLWbCAd8MPdb0kC1myMtyCoK3lHkOKOQRF6UYR KTQUzH7KNjsMzqHBWF9OmeZluJCCucwTpKsPgb6jCZkMMfaGr3/SxCbDBqsRaIfyV3axLI23 QV6GvalnAz4Ib9R6c78NDoBFfa2EsDvkP9eaDzB4O7QOVNImluJwKOzMFJHDwVAynW1mhJ3A ON/LmJjGdtA9qKbI4zBoGj7ShG1hdGBZRHgrTD5oExN2gk71LUT4KExp+2hTZsA9CBrzylYH 3CBjqYgh7ACtHa9X9T4rGF4+STgO9DPPVnVHMBSUicmiMRG87VlAJDUH5ZU3EEmtgK60ISoH uZWsCU44DloXG80sxdagLx5kiO4JUx/UNGFXeFw2vsoe8OL3e7RWL0WSp8hW4AQhNtLLy53j lecEIU7lruISqtHKL2rWLvnUoubvfjqEWSRfL20/woXKRIpEITlWh4Cl5TbSmJAVSRqhSL7C 8XFh/KUYTtChTSwjt5P+lVmHynCkIoGL5rh4jv/vUqyFQyq6sOgYEOnb5ZrSu0U3c6jd6+yc wflY4/3+88M/nU/NVK+bUB6mtaXlv64Hfen7fG2/X1JNQl3Sq8boPQLVVNEv2dxuuLuxILSb HbaeLniotzWOu4eUlt+ZvVg58iSaUhS40BO6HUNUV7x/cJUVnzikyczt2fttLPeoat7+eIqL OlbOCFGKXS40Lyj+AY/Eh3ZBAwAA
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/uMo8sFcK_XBai1gZugs6y3gQ5Bo>
Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] [avtcore] nits of draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines
X-BeenThere: avt@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance <avt.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/avt>, <mailto:avt-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/avt/>
List-Post: <mailto:avt@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:avt-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/avt>, <mailto:avt-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 14 Feb 2019 12:32:04 -0000

Hi,

These are from a quote of RFC 3550. Thus, simply note that this is the reason in the write-up.

Cheers

Magnus

On 2019-02-13 07:42, Huangyihong (Rachel) wrote:
Hi,

When running the idnits, following error is found:

“
Checking nits according to https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist :
  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------

  ** The document seems to lack a both a reference to RFC 2119 and the
     recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119
     keywords.

     RFC 2119 keyword, line 559: '...   SHOULD be carried in a separate RTP...'
     RFC 2119 keyword, line 562: '...nd video streams SHOULD NOT be carried...'

”

Since it’s an informational draft, do we have reasons to use these normative words? If no, they should be lowercase.

BR,
Rachel


--

Magnus Westerlund

----------------------------------------------------------------------
Network Architecture & Protocols, Ericsson Research
----------------------------------------------------------------------
Ericsson AB                 | Phone  +46 10 7148287
Torshamnsgatan 23           | Mobile +46 73 0949079
SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden | mailto: magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com<mailto:magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
----------------------------------------------------------------------

v2.23.0 | Report a Bug | By Email