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Re: [babel] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-03

Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> Tue, 18 July 2023 21:10 UTC

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From: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
To: Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-03
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Hello Joel, and thanks for your review.

> Nits:
>     In section 3.2 when describing the procedure, the paragraph about sending
>     the Hello which contains the IHU says it it must contain the sender's
>     timestamp.  It does not name that timestamp R2'.  The next paragraph refers
>     to the timestamp as R2' (for good reason.)  Please put the naming in the
>     earlier paragraph.

Right, noted.  I'll fix that when last call is over.

Thanks again,

-- Juliusz

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