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Re: [babel] Expiration impending: <draft-ietf-babel-applicability-00.txt>

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Mon, 02 January 2017 16:21 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 02 Jan 2017 11:20:45 -0500
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Subject: Re: [babel] Expiration impending: <draft-ietf-babel-applicability-00.txt>
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Suggested changes to fix nits in this draft:

All drafts must have a Security Considerations section and an IANA
Considerations section. The traditional thing to put in the IANA
Considerations section if there are none is:

This document requires no IANA actions. RFC Editor: Please remove this
section before publication.


Security Considerations section could possible mention the importance of
securing routing, relative hostility of different use environments, have a
pointer to RFC 7298, or the like...

The References need to be labeled as Informational or Normative. While you
can have normative references in Informational documents, in this case it
seems OK to just change the name of the References section to
"Informational References".

Square bracketed references are not allowed in the Abstract so "Babel
[RFC6126]" needs to change to something like "Babel (see RFC 6162)".

Some references need to be updated. draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric has
been published as RFC 7779, draft-savage-eigrp has been published as RFC
7868. There are also two draft referenced by specific version number where
subsequent versions have come out. I suggest just dropping the version
number: draft-ietf-manet-aodvv2-13 and draft-clausen-lln-loadng-14.

I'll check with my co-chair but I think with the above minor fixed, we
could probably do a WG Last Call on a revision of the draft.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Mon, Jan 2, 2017 at 7:42 AM, IETF Secretariat <
ietf-secretariat-reply@ietf.org> wrote:

> The following draft will expire soon:
>
> Name:     draft-ietf-babel-applicability
> Title:    Applicability of the Babel routing protocol
> State:    I-D Exists
> Expires:  2017-01-09 (in 6 days, 19 hours)
>
>

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