[babel] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-source-specific-07: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [babel] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-source-specific-07: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-babel-source-specific-07: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-babel-source-specific/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- [Dear all, please accept my apologies for the wrong DISCUSS point... a copy and paste error done without enough coffee... There are NO DISCUSS point in my ballot] Thank you for the work put into this document. The document is easy to read albeit not always clear and specific (see later). The topic of source address dependent routing is really critical for IPv6 deployment, so, I really appreciate your work on the topic Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points, and some nits. I also second Warren's DISCUSS on the lack of clarity in the section 4 example I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric == COMMENTS == Generic comment: did the author read draft-ietf-rtgwg-dst-src-routing ? It is an expired RTG WG adopted document and is not even cited as informative reference. Same for reference to RFC 8678. -- Section 3.1 -- Is the first "prefix" the "destination prefix" in the following text? If so, then I suggest to write "destination prefix" or explain what is this "prefix" with reference to the Bable RFC: "The source table is now indexed by triples of the form (prefix, source prefix, router-id)." -- Section 4 -- May I suggest to add another example with 2 entries have the same destination prefix but different source prefixes ? -- Section 6 -- May be my lack of knowledge in Babel is the reason why I do not understand the loop avoidance description... As written in the text, a single non-source-aware router in the network could be enough to introduce loop (in specific configurations). Writing the following text appear to me as a little hand waving because how can this be ensure (I was about to file a block DISCUSS on this but I am trusting the routing AD on this topic): " Consequently, this extension MUST NOT be used with routers implementing RFC 6126, otherwise persistent routing loops may occur." -- Section 6.2 -- The last paragraph is also a little hand waving where it is assumed that network topology/configuration is specific to avoid a route starvation. -- Section 7.1 -- Should the text state the obvious by stating that the prefix (non 8 multiple) is padded with bits set to 0 on transmission and those bits are ignored on reception ? == NITS == -- Section 4 and possibly others -- Please use RFC 5952 to write IPv6 addresses. -- Section 5.2 -- Please introduce the "AE" acronym at first use (even if guessable in the context).
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