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Re: [babel] I-D Action: draft-ietf-babel-rfc6126bis-06.txt

"STARK, BARBARA H" <bs7652@att.com> Tue, 23 October 2018 21:52 UTC

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To: 'Juliusz Chroboczek' <jch@irif.fr>, Toke Høiland-Jørgensen <toke@toke.dk>
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> >> The packet body and the packet trailer are both sequences of TLVs. A
> >> TLV may appear in the packet trailer only if it is explicitly allowed
> >> to do so: the receiver MUST silently ignore any TLV that appears in
> >> the packet trailer unless it is explicitly specified to be allowed in
> >> the packet trailer. Among the TLVs defined in this document, only
> >> Pad1 and PadN are allowed in the packet trailer; since these TLVs are
> >> ignored in any case, an implementation MAY silently ignore the packet
> >> trailer unless it implements at least one extension that uses the
> >> packet trailer.
> 
> > says "packet trailer" 7 times. That is painful; please fix... :)
> 
> It's a duck ;-)

I like the absence of pronouns with unclear antecedents.

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