Re: [babel] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-babel-rfc6126bis-04

Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> Fri, 20 April 2018 17:35 UTC

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Date: Fri, 20 Apr 2018 19:35:02 +0200
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From: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-babel-rfc6126bis-04
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Dear Mehmet,

> Reviewer: Mehmet Ersue
> Review result: Has Nits

Thanks for your review.  It will take me a few days to find the time to
produce a new revision.

> == There are 1 instance of lines with multicast IPv4 addresses in the document.
>  If these are generic example addresses, they should be changed to use the
> 233.252.0.x range defined in RFC 5771

If you are referring to Section 5, then this is the address assigned by
IANA to the protocol.  If you are referring to something else, I'd appreciate
a clarification.

Thanks,

-- Juliusz Chroboczek