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Re: [babel] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-babel-v4viav6-07: (with COMMENT)

Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> Thu, 24 February 2022 16:50 UTC

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From: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-babel-v4viav6-07: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks for your review, Erik.

> [Abstract; nit]
> 
> * s/annoncing/announcing/

Oh, wow.  In the abstract, no less.

> [S1; comment]
> 
> * "...enables a mode of operation where..."
> 
>   For your consideration: RFC 7404 talks about a mode of IPv6 link-local-only
>   operation; it might or might not be a useful citation.

Thanks, that looks interesting.  I'll read the document carefully before
I decide whether to cite it.

> [S2.4; nit]
> 
> * s/Next Hop and TLV/Next Hop and IHU/

Done.

> [S3; nit]
> 
> * The RFC 7600 reference is not to Section 22 but rather R-22 (Section 4.8).

Done.

-- Juliusz

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