[babel] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-applicability-08: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [babel] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-applicability-08: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-babel-applicability-08: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-babel-applicability/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Juliusz, Thank you for addressing my previous DISCUSS. I have edited my position to "no objection". -éric == (previous) DISCUSS == -- Section 2.2 -- The 'bug resistance' property of Babel was perhaps learned during the implementation, but, I wonder whether the document may simply state 'robust with respect to bugs', this is quite a strong statement that needs to be backed by facts or proof. == COMMENTS == The title of the document is about 'applicability'; but, should it also include 'use cases' in the title ? -- Section 3.1 -- The 2nd paragraph is too dense: should explain why Babel is a good fit. -- Section 5 -- Comparison between HMAC & DTLS variants is probably irrelevant in this document. Though, a use case with security in mind would be benefitial. Also, the comparison should include all aspects including confidentiality and anti-reply for both HMAC & DTLS. == NITS == -- Section 2.2 -- As I am not a native English speaker, I wonder whether 'light' should not be preferred to 'weak' in "These weak requirements make Babel a robust protocol" -- Section 3.1 -- Suggest to change the section name into "Diverse networks" or "heterogenous networks".
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