[babel] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-06: (with COMMENT)

Warren Kumari via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 18 April 2024 10:17 UTC

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Subject: [babel] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-06: (with COMMENT)
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Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-06: No Objection

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Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS (archived below for hysterical raisins):

"First off, let me start by saying that I like the general idea and concept in
this document, but, like others, I think that it needs more formalism.

One major concern of mine is that it says: "Updates: 8967 (if approved)"

The shepherds writeup notes that this document is Standards Track because it
needs to update a Standards Track document, but no-where in the document does
it actually say **how** it updates RFC8967. Perhaps the header intended to say
that the documents updates RFC8966? Even if that is the case, the document
doesn't actually say **how** it updates it... The Abstract should say "This
document updates RFC896X by fooing the bar and twiddling the baz." (or similar)"