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Re: [babel] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 28 June 2019 01:12 UTC

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To: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
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From: "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06
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Yes, it is (of course) fine to wait for other feedback before submitting 
a revision.

Yours,
Joel

On 6/27/19 8:41 PM, Juliusz Chroboczek wrote:
> Dear Joel,
> 
> Thank you very much for your review.
> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>     In section 2.2, in talking about "metric M", if I have understood properly,
>>     I think it would be clearer if you referred to "metric value M".
> 
> Thanks, noted.  If that's okay with you, I'll wait for the RTGDIR review
> before submitting a new revision.
> 
> -- Juliusz
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