[bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-15

Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com> Sun, 02 September 2018 20:33 UTC

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Subject: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-15

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-15
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2018-09-02
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written and
clear to understand.

This document defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB) for
use with network management protocols in the Internet community. In particular,
it describes common managed objects used by other MIB modules which are
designed for monitoring and/or configuring both Layer 2 and Layer 3 Virtual
Private Networks (VPN) that support multicast.

Major issues: Not found

Minor issues: Not found

Nits/editorial comments: Not found

[bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess… Ines Robles
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