Re: [bess] [pim] Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-igmp-mld-proxy

Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com> Tue, 07 December 2021 06:32 UTC

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From: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [bess] [pim] Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-igmp-mld-proxy
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Hi authors,

Here is a minor comment about Section 10.  IGMP/MLD Immediate Leave
It might be 'fast leave', not 'Immediate Leave'. Because 'fast leave' is mentioned in rfc2236(igmpv2), rfc3376(igmpv3) and rfc8652(igmp & mld model).

BR/Hongji

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Date: Thu, 2 Dec 2021 21:04:26 +0000
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Subject: [pim] Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-igmp-mld-proxy
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Hi team pim,

Per request from the bess wg chairs, please review https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-igmp-mld-proxy, which is in IESG evaluation, and provide any feedback by responding to this email.

Thank you.
mike
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