Re: [bess] AD Review of draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn

"Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <aretana@cisco.com> Thu, 10 September 2015 15:18 UTC

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From: "Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <aretana@cisco.com>
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On 8/4/15, 10:08 PM, "BESS on behalf of Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <bess-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:bess-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of aretana@cisco.com<mailto:aretana@cisco.com>> wrote:

Hi!

I just looked at the update in the –01 version that you published last week.

I think the general readability of the document could improve.  See below for some suggestions.  While that is not a showstopper, I would like to see my comments about the Security Considerations (see below) addressed before starting the IETF Last Call.

I think the Security Considerations look at lot better.  Once I start the IETF Last Call, we’ll get a review from the Security Directorate, please be on the lookout for that — I’m not sure if they’re going to want a little bit more or not.    Just a nit:  “…or PBBN else portions of the overall network…”  I think that “PBBN” should be removed.

Thanks!

Alvaro.