[Bier] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12: (with COMMENT)

Lars Eggert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 19 April 2022 14:44 UTC

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Subject: [Bier] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12: (with COMMENT)
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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bier-bar-ipa-12: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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The document has six authors, which exceeds the recommended author limit. Has
the sponsoring AD agreed that this is appropriate?

Thanks to Meral Shirazipour for their General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/JM0DuH-Nkq5MuFIzjTb2OthI6lQ).

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Paragraph 1754, nit:
> . If a BAR value is not specified in a RFC but only privately used for a dep
>                                      ^
Use "an" instead of "a" if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g.
"an article", "an hour".