[bmwg] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-09: (with COMMENT)

Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com> Wed, 18 April 2018 09:52 UTC

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Subject: [bmwg] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-09: (with COMMENT)

Martin Vigoureux has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-term-09: No Objection

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Hello,

I wonder about the use of the term "standard" in the abstract in view of the
intended status of the document (Informational). Could the use of this word
confuse the reader?

Also, in the Introduction the word "standard" is used. I don't have the same
concern here but wonder if a reference to these standard interfaces shouldn't
be provided.

Found a few nits found here and there:
s/an Network Device/a Network Device/
s/In order to for the controller to/In order for the controller to/
s/This benchmark determine /This benchmark determines/
s/at its Southbound interface ./at its Southbound interface./

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